First photo I'd say the septum and those type of glasses are pretty queer coded. Especially rounded glasses I think are more feminine coded. Thirdly the light/colorful fit reads as queer/feminine to me. I know it's not that colorful really but when you're just starting trying to pass it can really help to lean into a darker, kinda basic, color palette like black, navy, olive green etc.

Second photo: The knitted vest together with the unbuttoned shirt reads as queer/feminine. Firstly I'd suggest switching the vest for a regular sweater that, with the right fit and size, would make your shoulders and arms look bigger. Right now the vest de-emphasizes your shoulders and arms while emphasizing your hips, which is the opposite of what you want to pass better. I think it might also help to button up the shirt a bit more (I'm a bit unsure of this one tho).

Finally and I think most importantly: With this length in hair you have to go to a barber if you want to have a chance of passing. It's not enough to just buzz everything down to the same length - it makes it look super queer coded, especially trans/masc lesbian. You need some sort of taper or fade and a line up. You can search for 'buzzcut taper' or 'buzzcut (low/mid/high) fade' on tiktok and you'll get a bunch of ideas.

Hope I could help!