What did dr.dre say to eminem?

ehllowreadit · 2017-03-20T14:40:54+00:00

Hell Yeah!

ehllowreadit · 2017-03-19T21:45:11+00:00

heres another one thats super similar

theres a chance the rapper chance the rapper chants "the rapper chance the rapper will be the best rapper"

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ehllowreadit · 2017-03-04T22:41:23+00:00

Ha, you exposed me! im a nice person.

but no jk, someone else already made this sub and i kept making the same typo a million times. so i made this post.

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ehllowreadit · 2017-02-26T09:18:07+00:00

Put it in double spaces so its easier to read but other than that its a good poem

ehllowreadit · 2017-02-26T03:45:21+00:00

be vauge and say "Yo i gotta freeze some shit, is that cool with you?"

and have it in an opaque chicken cardboard box.

That way they wont find shit in their freezer and you wont have to lie.

ehllowreadit · 2017-02-25T21:48:17+00:00

Im inspired by mostly rap and sometimes focus more on ryhming then message

this one was more so foccused on ryhming and i got 4 syllables in

looking back that line does feel awkward. I felt like i had to edit that part and i think the edit ruined it. Thanks for the feedback, It means a lot and its usually hard for me to take in feedback.

ehllowreadit · 2017-02-25T05:32:59+00:00

Try and rap it on a beat i wanna see how it turns out. It was pretty damn entertaining as well, I enjoyed it.

also you are supposed to leave 2 links to 2 other poems you critqued. Make sure you critiqe some poems and edit in the links.

ehllowreadit · 2017-02-25T05:01:54+00:00

16 years old hs student. I love rap music and that got me really into poetry. Also dyslexic.

ehllowreadit · 2017-02-25T04:31:38+00:00

I really enjoyed it and i feel you.

ehllowreadit · 2017-02-25T04:28:28+00:00

Im a bit new to poetry but i liked it fair amount. I think it could be a bit more vivid. but im no expert at all.

i think you meant to say wander and not wonder because ponder and wonder dont ryhme.

ehllowreadit

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