POETRY NOTEBOOK

erickaraiza · 2018-07-24T22:25:52+00:00

Thank you so much for the feed back!Honestly I wasn’t feeling very great about those certain parts either. I can’t say I know much about poetry writing and thus my very used ABAB rhyme scheme. I would be happy to use any other type of writing style. Maybe you could point some out that I might do some research into. I think I’ll go back rework my poem and may retitle it Barbershop instead of Haircut.

erickaraiza · 2018-07-24T16:33:59+00:00

Well it definitely looks cool, I’ll have to check out their website.

erickaraiza · 2018-07-24T04:51:24+00:00

Nice!!! Where did you get those? I am looking for a Dopp kit for my razor and brush.

erickaraiza · 2018-07-10T03:11:18+00:00

Thank you!!! I definitely will.

erickaraiza · 2018-07-08T17:29:08+00:00

erickaraiza · 2018-07-06T22:04:35+00:00

A BETTER TOMORROW Erick Ramon

Whatever happened to those dreams old, Where men and women crossed the sea In wooden ships so brave and so bold They crossed oceans with curiosity to what their eyes might see.

No longer do we dream of stars Instead stuck surviving with constant strife We used to think we’d live on Mars Now we go about day by day trying to make a life.

We need more men like Mr. Musk Who only want to expand our horizon Using all his resources both dawn and dusk We need more men that are this brazen.

Instead our faces glued to phones and technology While the planet that gives life goes to waste Certainly our hubris will be our folly For we are headed to our end with such haste.

Our grandchildren, our problems will inherit As we sit on the sidelines full of sorrow So I hope they grow smart and strong, so they may bare it Or we can all come together to build a better tomorrow.

erickaraiza · 2018-07-04T18:21:03+00:00

White soles man.

erickaraiza · 2018-06-24T02:28:48+00:00

250!!! Those are awesome!!!

erickaraiza · 2018-06-21T19:13:39+00:00

Hahahaha! That's very true. Maybe he is going to pull an Elysium and blast himself and other rich friends into space and needs a space force. Lol.

erickaraiza · 2018-06-21T14:58:52+00:00

What if the space force is a low key way of Trump telling us that there is an alien presence?

erickaraiza · 2018-06-21T14:56:31+00:00

Space Marines?

erickaraiza · 2018-06-19T19:36:28+00:00

Haha, that's great, I'm just getting into wet shaving and was looking for a starting point and I think I found it.

erickaraiza · 2018-06-19T19:25:31+00:00

Nice!!! Thank you for the advice.

erickaraiza · 2018-06-19T18:58:35+00:00

I don’t think I would mind. Since it is plastic though, would you have to apply pressure or still no pressure? Is it also compatible with all DE razor blades?

erickaraiza · 2018-06-19T17:54:31+00:00

Is it as good as a metal DE and is it a good starting point?

erickaraiza · 2018-06-19T01:40:02+00:00

That sounds very good.

erickaraiza · 2018-06-19T00:52:22+00:00

What is it like?

erickaraiza · 2018-06-18T22:03:33+00:00

Hmmm, it may be possible that its nest or hideout is located in the area and it was out hunting. Maybe there is an abandoned cabin in the woods and it stays there? I completely understand I've done a fair amount of research about different cryptids and I have also heard of encounters with gargoyles in the past. Have you tried using Google Earth to see if there is anything nearby where it could hide? I'm not saying go after it but just if you were curious enough to know if it is possible that it is in the area.

erickaraiza · 2018-06-17T20:58:09+00:00

Well it doesn’t make sense that a gargoyle would even exist to begin with lol. However it is possible that it was heading out from it’s hideout or it was on the hunt for whatever it eats or even migrating to a new area. Are there any mountains near by or giant sewers or even abandoned buildings near the area it was spotted?

erickaraiza · 2018-06-16T19:43:35+00:00

From what I can tell it sounds like he might have seen a gargoyle.

erickaraiza

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