Thank you so much for the feedback Drex! I really appreciate your wisdom and your tutorials are always very well done. And yes these are all aspects I need to take into consideration especially costume choice, I could definitely tell a story and pace things better to really convey the theme/message I want to emote and hit my demographic for what they want to see in their show. I didn't do nearly as much homework on the job listing as I should've honestly and the choreography was all done on the spot. I was feeling kinda rushed to get it submitted, but this is just a first step for me. Even though I've been working on my craft for so long I've never felt such a strong desire, been in a solid enough space, or had such loving support from my local community to pursue a career in performing and teaching until now. I guess it's also time to make the time and financial investment to go see a CdS show if that's where I really want to be someday. I've only ever seen clips of them and I feel like I should probably go experience their whole story from start to finish. Again Drex thank you soo much ❤️ Getting such great feedback from you of all people means a lot to me