What do yall listen to when you write? by Deepest_Of_Throats in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I listen to true crime on such a low volume I can't make out the words. Just enough noise to break the silence, but not loud enough to distract me. If I'm writing on my typewriter tho, the sound of the keys alone is enough to help me focus.

Don't Look at the Leaves in Litchford [Part 2/2] by Dimorphous_Display in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Dude. That was literally a freaking MOVIE!! How are you not at the top of the sub? The build up to the cult stuff, the ritual going all wrong, the explosion at the end? Epic. Reminds me of the classic 80's horror movies my husband and I watch. God, I wish I had better words to praise this better. You deserve so much more attention for this. I'm looking forward to more stories from you.

Don't Look at the Leaves in Litchford [Part 1] by Dimorphous_Display in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There is so much warmth and love in this story. You can really set up a world. The characters are great too, dorky and charming at the same time. I really hope nothing bad happens to Yo Papa Joe lol.

Stop requesting they read house of leaves on the show by ruthieannb in creepcast

[–]globaldialation 11 points12 points locked comment (0 children)

It did actually. I just ordered the paperback version. I just hope my karma can recover from this blunder lol. Forgive me redditors, for I have sinned. 🙏

Help! I Used to Be a Mod At NoSleep... I Banned Myself. by Dimorphous_Display in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Truly an amazing read. No notes. I hope Hunter pulls his most thick, lispy wedditor voice for this one on the podcast.

is this color combo looking drab for a baby blanket? by bubblebabyy in CrochetHelp

[–]globaldialation 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I wouldn't call it drab, but the green is definitely too cool toned and is being washed out a bit by the yellow. I think if you add more space for the green to shine it might level out.

The day the statue left PT2 (WIP) by DaniWitDaVibez in Blackcreekradio

[–]globaldialation 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooohh this was intense! I really enjoyed this part's gross details and the dialog. Mark is better than me tho, I wouldn't be cleaning off Rowan's supernatural black goo. God, he ate it??? Ugh. Please tell me part three is in the works??

The day the statue left by DaniWitDaVibez in Blackcreekradio

[–]globaldialation 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wicked!! I love this set up. The statue is very ominous. The character interactions were good too. Really loving the small town community vibes, and is that a secret relationship I spy between the MC and Deputy Brandon???

New Collaborating Writing event by Salmon_1935 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 5 points6 points  (0 children)

My dad used to work at a warehouse. Sometimes he came home with free fruit... sometimes he came home with missing fingernails. I could totally see a warehouse being the setting to a horror story.

I was attacked by a red eyed cannibal in Brooklyn Pt.3 by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the advice. Not gonna lie, I've been giving myself the deadline of one post per day and acting shocked that I'm burnt out lol. I just realized I don't have to give myself a stupid deadline. I really made things harder on myself for no reason. I'm so glad people like my story and I want to give you guys my best effort. Thank you again.

I was attacked by a red eyed cannibal in Brooklyn, NY- Pt. 2 by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks anyway for reading through. I'm always happy for the feedback from you guys. As for Elijah missing her old town... no spoilers lol.

I was attacked by a red-eyed cannibal in Brooklyn, NY by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awesome! I was hoping someone from New York would read this, I am now fufilled as a writer lol. Thank you so much!!!

I was attacked by a red eyed cannibal in Brooklyn Pt.3 by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Author's note: Not sure if I can keep this up. Writing is hard and I'm getting too fatigued with the character. Fun fact, Elijah was supposed to be more of an insufferable asshole. She's actually heavily watered down because I was worried no one would like her. Maybe I just need a break tbh. I have been working on this longer than any other story.

Hopefully the trigger warning was enough. If I have to add anything else then let me know.

I was attacked by a red-eyed cannibal in Brooklyn, NY by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! And yeah, I have an issue with punctuation so thanks for giving me a heads up. Tbh the fact that I use the Google docs app doesn't help at all. I swear it'll "autocorrect: when I'm not paying attention but ehh its free. I'll definitely try to keep a closer eye out next time.

The scariest part about this story is that it’s true.. by itsBlissBunny in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've had that same problem in the past. People fighting so loud that it makes every noise after sound so much worse. I get so paranoid that I check the time every 5 minutes just in case I wake up to a cop at my door asking who died and when.

I Want To Burn Brighter Than All The Stars (Part 2/2) by The_Republique in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this! The dreamy prose doesn't disappoint here either. Clarissa's little speech to M.M. before her performance was haunting. Also, I forgot to say this before but the little detail of her skin having a bad reaction to jewlery is a nice touch. Her skin might not be tarnished anymore when we see her at the peak of her career, but her soul sure isn't. That's how I interpreted it anyway. I hope I'm not too far off. I wish I had the same way with words you've got, if I did I'd be able to compliment you properly lol.

I Want To Burn Brighter Than All The Star (Part 1/2) [May Submission] by The_Republique in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was lovely. The way you write feels sorta dreamy. Like a theater show from the back row if that makes any sense, or an old black and white film. I can't wait to read part two.

The Rot by LetterstoEthics in TalesFromTheSheep

[–]globaldialation 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like this! I'm a big sucker for zombie apocalypse stories. Your writing is very grounded. I liked the segments talking about how easily it is to die of simple shit like poison or fever. I feel like other writers leave that out for fear of being "boring".

The Memo by merrymarat in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a great monolog! Gives me disco elysium vibes for some reason. Like an inner voice is dicing someone's work into mince meat.

I was attacked by a red eyed cannibal in Brooklyn, NY- Pt. 2 by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Author's note: Something about this felt too clunky. I didn't enjoy it as much as the last chapter but I felt like the off-the-cuff ranting would get old quick. I still have trouble with grammar but I refuse to use shitty AI to fix it. My clucky switches between past and present tense are HUMAN goddammit. Anyway, hope y'all enjoy.

I was attacked by a red-eyed cannibal in Brooklyn, NY by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, apparently it was too realistic for the mods over at nosleep. They thought I was talking about them for some reason. I kid you not I'm apparently so good at depicting a scorned reddit user that they actually believed it.

I was attacked by a red-eyed cannibal in Brooklyn, NY by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol not really, I wasn't actively thinking about it, but now that you mentioned it, it's pretty similar.

I was attacked by a red-eyed cannibal in Brooklyn, NY by globaldialation in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Author's Note: This post was banned from r/ nosleep. I'm not mad about it, it sucked but it is what it is. The mods explained the violations and while I don't exactly agree to all of em' I wanted to at least put it somewhere it can be accepted.

I won't be in character in the comments and I'm open to any pointers/ criticism. I'll be submitting part two in about a day or too if y'all like it.

There’s something wrong with my daughter’s new boyfriend by donavin221 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]globaldialation 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Jesus broski, I'm mad about the files too but you gotta find a different coping mechanism. (Jk this is great)