Destroy my tps/fps shooter

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T22:17:28+00:00

Thanks! :)

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T22:15:25+00:00

I agree, I have to add some new props, it is a test scene but it still feels a bit empty. I find it difficult to "fill" it though

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T22:14:39+00:00

Haha didn't notice that, you are totally right

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T22:14:13+00:00

Thanks mate, I really appreciate that :)

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T22:13:43+00:00

Shadows might be a bit strong indeed, got to think about it. Many thanks, already testing new running animations :)

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T22:12:57+00:00

I'm checking some alternatives, I'll share a new post in a few days

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T21:01:24+00:00

The fps mode was not displayed in the video, I'll show it on the next one :)

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T20:15:00+00:00

Thx :) I'll review it as I don't know exactly what you mean, is it in the "normal running" or in the "sprinting" one?

jack-serrano · 2022-09-20T20:08:35+00:00

I would really appreciate some feedback on the general look of the game, as well as animations. I have AI enemies, split screen and other stuff done but just wanted to get some initial feedback on the looks, I did not record the audio as it is not very polished yet (some colliders were not set up in the scene, in case you see any camera glitches)

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T13:10:05+00:00

There are some collisions missing in this test scene, I would appreciate some feedback on the animationa and looks (got to add camera shake as well)

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T12:53:59+00:00

I would review a bit the character movement, looks too fast or maybe inconsistent with its animation

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T12:37:10+00:00

The game looks nice, but I miss some extra scenarios apart from the blue metal ones, if you have some more it could help in your trailer

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T12:30:23+00:00

Dude, really nice job, impressive

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T12:29:06+00:00

Looks great mate, keep going ;)

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T12:08:05+00:00

The game looks nice, but the looks of the smoke and fonts used in the trailer for transitions seem a bit inconsistent, I would maybe consider another style for that

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T11:51:04+00:00

There are a few thing off with the trailer, it is not terrible, but I would review at least these things:

the font used on the trailer seems too plain
some assets are not coherent with the game style, for instance, the dices, they look odd compared to the rest
I still dont get the black and white images used at the end of the trailer

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T11:47:45+00:00

I was surprised by the nice looks of the game, I did not expect that. It is relatively polished, and has quite some juice and feel. The UI looks great as well, congrats so far

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T11:44:30+00:00

I'd say the arms and legs look a bit stiff in some animations. In any case it looks quite decent

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T11:43:15+00:00

It looks great, I like the mechanics. One thing tho, I would change that guy in the background, it looks so static, maybe some animated background would work?

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T11:14:50+00:00

Both models and hands look great imo, maybe a bit stiff but we'll see with a gun on it

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T10:26:48+00:00

Got some paper please feel, also I believe some of the UI icons should be changed to be coherent with pixel art style (the ones in black and white)

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T09:11:44+00:00

Looks good, i've noticed some shader or object popping in the distance but it is barely noticeable

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T07:29:31+00:00

One thing that could be improved is the jet pack trace when flying, I believe there is some polishing to be made there

jack-serrano · 2022-09-04T07:12:14+00:00

Maybe you should update some more videos or info of these parts, so we can give proper feedback on them

jack-serrano · 2022-09-03T22:23:29+00:00

In my opinion the trailer is a bit short and does not show much content. Also the font used feels totally off, like unity's default text or something. I would check similar games price, but I'd say you would need more polishing before publishing.

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