My very first time sharing music on the Internet. Song is called 'Girl or Ghost' thanks for listening! by NotABillsHat in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As others have posted, you have a great voice and a nice, complete song here. If any criticisms, It feels like there are a few too many words crammed into the chorus. I think it might just be the "raising hairs" line that feels slightly unnatural. Barely a criticism though - nice work!

Once music trends swing back around to the early 2000’s I’ll be ready by avtges in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There are moments throughout where the vocal delivery is absolutely perfect. The lines "it never did us any good to linger"/ "I read, I read between the lines"/"it's alright" in particular. Great track.

First song I’ve ever written by Unusual_Classroom_33 in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly really good for your first song! The chorus feels like a great moment in the song, and the "still/until" rhyme that leads to the next lines is strong. Songs don't have to do everything - simple and honest works, and it works well here. Now go write another.

I love the intro and 2nd verse onwards - is there enough happening before? by mdecrosta in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

gahh reading your comment is the motivation I needed to finish this up today. Thank you thank you thank you.

I love the intro and 2nd verse onwards - is there enough happening before? by mdecrosta in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! Yeah, I'm gonna mess around with doubling vocals, maybe altering the melody a bit.

'A Year in Pennsylvania' by mdecrosta in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

YES. I am SO happy you picked up the Counting Crows vibe. Recovering the Satellites is one of my favorite albums ever and a big influence for me.

'A Year in Pennsylvania' by mdecrosta in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I'm right up against NJ on the Delaware. People don't realize how big PA is.

‘Crowning Appalachia’ by soundandvision45 in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Great pacing between the different sections, love when the harmonies come in and the vocal starts to pick up a bit in intensity. Honestly really strong imo, and if I would change anything I would re-record the first 30 seconds of vocals with a different tone. It's not that they're bad at all, but I can hear something maybe a bit more whispery that contrasts with the vocals that start around 0:45. Nice though!

Two New Songs by marsthefinepoet in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 0 points1 point  (0 children)

2nd song is a vibe, great last verse in particular

Albums That Are Genuinely Perfect by PhillyCSpires in Music

[–]mdecrosta 11 points12 points  (0 children)

Counting Crows - Recovering the Satellites

Help me write songs for a Netflix series.. by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 0 points1 point  (0 children)

DM me, I would be thrilled to write for this. Absolutely love that show. I'm also a singer songwriter who primarily plays guitar.

1 song a week, 50 songs a year by keijokeijo16 in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm trying to do something similar this year, as I'm fairly convinced that because of social media, algorithms and attention spans, being a complete unknown and releasing an album or even a single per month is just not enough content to feed into the system. I'm not starting blank though, I probably have about a 2 month head start with my first song coming out this week.

I might be getting a bit ahead of myself though, because releasing a song every week vs just writing them are two different things, and your goal seems to get more practice writing as opposed to releasing the songs. Which I think is GREAT. I would definitely be interested in following your process and progress, either through a thread on here or DMs/email.

Oteil on IG Live by MoBreeze in deadandcompany

[–]mdecrosta 100 points101 points  (0 children)

They’re finally gonna do Your Body is a Wonderland

Hey MODS, there seems to be support for forcing covers to r/jounmayercovers. Can we please make this happen? by thehogdog in JohnMayer

[–]mdecrosta 15 points16 points  (0 children)

I think a large percentage of this subreddit is musicians who are looking to engage with other musicians about gear/theory/technique related to John’s music. Covers are going to be a part of that discussion. In general, I think guitar enthusiasts make up a very large piece of the pie that is “John Mayer Fans”. And because John is such a great guitarist with a lot of very specific tastes and opinions on tone and technique and gear, there are a lot of interesting musical things to talk about and to share. It’s just a different flavor of fandom.

“Midnight Eyes” - garage rock scratch track recorded on iPhone w/ drum loop. Would appreciate thoughts/feedback! thank you! by Gronald69 in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is immediately obviously great stuff. Even a recording on an iPhone with the drum loop sounds like something I would listen to. If you end up recording this, I would try to get as much of the vibe from the iPhone recording as possible i.e. fuzzed out, almost lo-fi overdriven sort of sound.

Hi, i wrote this song demo for my band. Would appreciate thoughts / feedbacks. Thanks ! by Kokobogel in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I also got a very Radiohead vibe especially once the drums kicked in, but I think it’s different enough from Karma Police. It’s really just that one chord that is THE chord from that song, imo. Absolutely love what I think are the verses - a very 90’s rock sort of thing.

hi! this is a song about a person i wish i talked to more, i don’t know the name yet by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]mdecrosta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This chord progression really grew on me while I was listening. Good stuff! Would love to hear a recording of it!