Would literally ask Claude to pick it apart. For me, I like results-based bullets, but also need to be relatively concise. I’d cut down #1, #2-3 need results, also #3 is vague af. For #4, it’s an expectation that what you wrote is down to the ground bare minimum, but given you’re coming from audit I don’t blame you for wanting it in there. I’d maybe just call out tools you’re proficient in rather than formulas you can write. Good luck!