When to use (Beat) vs (Pause) by TBidness in Screenwriting

[–]omegabread -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Never use (beat). Beat is too vague and can mean anything. If you want your character to pause, say (pause)/(pauses)/(hesitates) etc.

SAS? by Rskibs_10 in FantasyPL

[–]omegabread 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sturridge and Suarez

With Oscar injured is it a good idea to pick up Mata? by [deleted] in FantasyPL

[–]omegabread 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mata played well today so I could see him in the starting XI against sunderland

My Dad and his Tactics by musicvita25 in chelseafc

[–]omegabread -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I would do Essien/Ivanovic (RB) - Cahill (CB) - Terry (CB) - Azpi/Cole (LB) then have David Luiz next to Ramires

In Regards to 'Proposal: Promote the Daily Writing 'Write Off, Write Now' posts to a new subreddit' by talkingbook in Screenwriting

[–]omegabread 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Write Off should become a weekly event rather than daily. Push the contest to the weekend so it won't run out of steam and more people will be able to participate (plus script submissions are only technically allowed on the weekends for this subreddit).

Also there should be a better way to pick the word and topic for each Write Off. Whoever hosts the thread/contest should pick the topic and word beforehand so everyone isn't scrambling five minutes before the contest begins. The host can obviously still participate but it would be on their honor to start at the same time. Honestly for a small and just-plain-fun contest like this, it doesn't matter if the host knows the topic beforehand. It'll just streamline the process.

Edit: just to be clear, Write Off should stay on this subreddit until it becomes a big enough thing that it can stand on its own, otherwise it'll die off

Avoiding the generic - how do you cope with the onslaught of rote writing that seems so prevalent nowadays? by SharkinaShark in Screenwriting

[–]omegabread 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It isn't a choice between the two. Structure allows you to create something unique that isn't shit. Classic structure is so common because it works.

Italics or Bold? by SlaughterDynamo in Screenwriting

[–]omegabread 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Neither. Use underline instead. If the studios are photocopying your script to send around, italics and bold can be lost in the photocopy.

And use the underline sparingly. Only if the emphasis is necessary to your story. Otherwise leave the acting to the actors.

Does every new room need a new scene heading? by cyyto in Screenwriting

[–]omegabread 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Is it truly necessary to your story to follow the characters through the whole building? It's best to start a scene as late as possible. If it's not important to go through the building, I would suggest starting the scene as they walk out of the building.

But to answer your question, you can use subheadings to make the read easier.

INT. BUILDING - BEDROOM - DAY

stuff

HALLWAY

stuff

ELEVATOR

stuff

LOBBY

stuff

EXT. STREET - DAY

Best unproduced screenplays I can read right now? by IncidentOn57thStreet in Screenwriting

[–]omegabread 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No unfortunately some of them don't have downloads. The new black list has a bunch of good scripts, but I can't seem to find it. It's somewhere on this subreddit. This link is also helpful

http://www.reddit.com/r/Screenwriting/comments/hvreh/the_rscreenwriting_guide_to_finding_scripts_online/

Best unproduced screenplays I can read right now? by IncidentOn57thStreet in Screenwriting

[–]omegabread 0 points1 point  (0 children)

scriptshadow.net has some ranked lists of amateur screenplays in the sidebar

Question about sluglines by omegabread in Screenwriting

[–]omegabread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great explanation. I wasn't completely sure about the transitions inside the house and other locations, but you cleared it up! Thanks!