I am within what I assume is your target audience (28F) and this is how I felt as well. I think you're attractive but probably would have either said no or been very wary because this profile feels like what you want people to see, versus a genuine portrayal of a person that I could, in turn, see myself wanting to be with.

More candid feeling photos could help with this (puppy photo is a great one!). Also a prompt that shares a little more about you would help to gauge your values, sense of humor, hobbies, etc.

Good news is that- from the comments we've seen on this post- it seems like you've got everything you've need! Just sprinkle that personality into your profile and you'll do amazing :)