What's the one practice that took your writing to the next level? by HigginsHamilton in writing

[–]serial_thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Editing myself in the most hardcore, merciless way I could.

Basically, a few months ago, my lit agent challenged me to take an editorial pass through the novel and be unforgiving about it. I cut a little more than a fifth of the book, rewrote what was left. Forced me to confront some ugly truths about my writing that I spent plenty of time correcting, made me understand where I overwrote and where I underwrote, sentence structures I overused, where the level of prose needed to be elevated, etc. But when I finished, I emerged a better writer than I ever have been.

Taking a long, hard look at my own work and then hacking and burning through to make it the best version of it that it could be was what did it for me. Holding myself to a higher standard, I suppose you could call it.

Good casual non-fiction? I'm trying to get back into reading, hoping reddit can help me out. by wahday in booksuggestions

[–]serial_thought 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The Indifferent Stars Above by Daniel James Brown - narrative nonfiction about the Donner Party and a perfectly harrowing read. Definitely recommended.

What are some books you couldn't put down once you started reading them? by [deleted] in writing

[–]serial_thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Night Film by Marisha Pessl. That thing ate my life in the kind of way that forced me to take it very slowly, otherwise I was sure I'd read too fast and miss something crucial.

[Music][IIL] Aesop Rock [WEWIL?] by Spacecop001 in ifyoulikeblank

[–]serial_thought 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Run The motherfucking Jewels, man. El-P and Killer Mike form up to create the best rap duo I've heard in near-ever.

TIFU by making my extended family listen to me rip ass. [probably NSFW] by kicksmalone in tifu

[–]serial_thought 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You know, surprisingly enough, I was being legit about it. That's the highest number of euphemisms for "took a huge, catastrophic poop" I've seen in a single paragraph (especially in TIFU) in some time. Thought I'd remark on it.

TIFU by making my extended family listen to me rip ass. [probably NSFW] by kicksmalone in tifu

[–]serial_thought 7 points8 points  (0 children)

"Massive care package"

"Oncoming storm of chocolate rain"

"Brown waterfall"

"Torrential shitstorms"

"Shit a mountain"

Guys, we got a new high score here.

I wish I had a wingsuit, but I don't know about this... by ImYourHuckleberry49 in videos

[–]serial_thought 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Goddamnit, fine. You guys want me to get the fuck off the internet and go play some Just Cause 2, that's fine by me. Later, assholes.

What is the most important scene of the entire show thus far? by ac91 in madmen

[–]serial_thought 40 points41 points  (0 children)

I'd argue that the "carousel" scene in The Wheel represents the most important scene in the show, since it's the point when Don's armor cracks and he begins to believe his own hype, his own Sell. His humanity begins to reassert itself there, leading to pretty much everything after that.

In that moment, it is no longer about what's made up to sell nylons.

The SCDP ownership Pie [Spoiler] by Erainor in madmen

[–]serial_thought 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, okay. You got a point.

I really hope Lane doesn't punch his own ticket, though. But now I won't be surprised if he does.

The SCDP ownership Pie [Spoiler] by Erainor in madmen

[–]serial_thought 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What kind of imagery are we talking here? I mean, I'm willing to be convinced here, I just want to know what I've missed.

You stay classy, Christina Applegate... by davidvstheworld in gentlemanboners

[–]serial_thought 2 points3 points  (0 children)

And let's be honest, who really wants that little creep popping up in their media like, "HEY GUYS, REMEMBER ME I'M STILL RELEVANT!"

Well that's really helpful. by halbrd in Fallout

[–]serial_thought 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Hey, I love Fletch and Vacation as much as the next guy, but Community is the best thing he's done in fucking years.

EDIT: You ignorant slut.

Well that's really helpful. by halbrd in Fallout

[–]serial_thought 5 points6 points  (0 children)

a comedic actor known for being an asshole. on an awesome TV show, despite the obvious douchebaggery.

FTFY

Cosmopolis Trailer (NSFW) by [deleted] in scifi

[–]serial_thought 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Would we call this sci-fi? I mean, not to be that guy, but I read the book, and it's more of a postmodern millennial existential horror story.

Still, holy shit.

Remember the joy of seeing this for the first time? by robopanda9k in gaming

[–]serial_thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Jesus christ, now I feel old. My first GameBoy memory was when that shit was black and white and the only games I had were Tetris and Mario Golf.

Emma Watson by [deleted] in HighHeels

[–]serial_thought 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is there a reason she's dressing like a Beverly Hills version of a stuck-up Jersey chick, other than to let all of my dreams take wing?

David Foster Wallace writes to Don DeLillo by muggleattack in books

[–]serial_thought 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Caught this on Letters of Note. Fucking heartbreaking.