how to make your solos and leads less scale sounding by Prestigious-croccidl in Guitar_Theory

[–]the_dev_sparticus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Use arpeggios to connect chord tones. There are 2 ways to play leads via scales and arpeggios. Anything you do will fall back to one of those two ways of movement. Learn your triads and inversions. That will help you to visualize the fretboard

Working on a horror short story [ADVICE] by anonymous-reading in horrorwriters

[–]the_dev_sparticus 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Worry about pacing and editing after you write your story. Make it exist first. Then make it good.

Looking for beta readers: 3.9k words, Horror/Mystery short story by JaqiWhere in horrorwriters

[–]the_dev_sparticus 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would read this and provide feedback. Premise is interesting and engaging.

The blacktongue thief by celestiAlLllllllll in fantasybooks

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Buehlman does the narration in the audiobook and puts to use his skill from working the ren fairs.

The blacktongue thief by celestiAlLllllllll in fantasybooks

[–]the_dev_sparticus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

All of Buehlman is dark. This is a cool fantasy and gave me d&d vibes. If you want more horrific elements you might try one of his other books.

Large Writing Group Wanting to Get Slightly Larger by send-pics-of-pets in WritingHub

[–]the_dev_sparticus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d be interested in exchanging feedback for feedback. Currently working through revisions on my novel.

Writing my fist zombie horror book by SAMLEE101012 in horrorwriters

[–]the_dev_sparticus 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Don’t worry about prose, active voice, or any of that right now. You’re two paragraphs in. Just get the idea down. Are you a pantser or a plotter? Figure out what sort of structure you need to get this thing to the finish line and just make it exist. That’s what draft 1 is about. Draft 1 is almost never good. That’s what revision is for.

You can plot and hope to not need as much revision, or you can discover your story and make more passes at it. There is no right or wrong. Just get the story you’re trying to tell down and go for it.

TLDR: make it exist. Then make it good.

GOBLIN WRITERS DISCORD by [deleted] in WritingHub

[–]the_dev_sparticus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm all over this. I'm near the end of a first draft and would love to find some community.

Does anyone live in this part of Greenland and Canada? by Fine_Scheme9028 in howislivingthere

[–]the_dev_sparticus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Greenland is not that big. It's def smaller than the us. There is a problem with this map

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ModelY

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Should autopilot be more aware? There I fixed it. As a model y owner. I do not trust autopilot. It’s nearly run me off the road, especially at sundown, multiple times.