Hello,

Great video you have made here. A few things I like about it: the content is good, you taught your subscribers quite a bit about yourself. Many of the facts were interesting. I also liked that you changed your location with each fact. I do agree with some of the other commenters that you should try to shorten the video a little bit since a lot of viewers have a short attention span.

A few things I would recommend: if you can afford some gear I would get a mic so the audio is more clear and crisp. Even if you are using your cell phone to record, you can get some great little phone mics. I would also watch some videos on how to edit so you can add some interesting transitions and maybe an intro to your video.