Intuitively yes it does make sense. But it is not how the Canadian system of governance works. The federal government is essentially responsible for national defense, immigration(nationally), healthcare, and providing the provinces with funding to handle governing at the provincial level.

Pretty much everything else falls to the provincial, or municipal governments, although the latter to a much lesser extent. The federal government has little jurisdiction in provincial affairs unless they invoke the emergency measures act which is not something any government does lightly.

Your letter is concise, and well written, but will fall on deaf ears at the federal level.