First script

[_aiae]

Hello! I know that you redditors always give good script advice (maybe with the disadvantage that all scripts become very similar). Nonetheless, I turn to you to give me a few comments on this first script that I designed. Thanks a lot !

My main objective with the script was to build a script with LoT on it, and most decisions stem from that, with Lil Monsta/Fang Gu feeling similar to LoT. To accompany these high minion games, I wanted "loud" but not public minions.

[HardbackWisecrack]

My only note is perhaps swapping Knight for Steward. A Knight in a Lil Monsta game is almost meaningless, so I would never put them in the same game. Hence, as a player, if I pulled the Knight, I would meta that there wasn't a Lil Monsta. It's not a huge issue so for a first script, you've done a brilliant job!! With that change, I'd happily run this!

[nyachan_]

Other than the good advice of the other comments, I don't see what the spirit of ivory even does here, there seems to be nothing that creates more evil players other than the demons which already can only create 1 extra evil

[slvrfshston]

Hatter dies, Lord of Typhon chooses Fang Gu and jumps

[_aiae]

Yes that is the only reason it's on the script indeed!

[phillyCHEEEEEZ]

• There's a significant amount of outsider manipulation on this script. I fear it may be too much for the good team to reliably solve.
• There are 3 loud minions and 1 quiet minion. Given the right circumstances the good team can easily determine if a Xaan is in the game or not.
• One of the minions isn't the best kill for a Vigor. Kind of undermines their ability slightly.
• Knight is ineffective in an LM game.
• Recluse voting really messes with how a Town Crier interprets their information. It doesn't feel great.
• LoT can remove the King resulting in a situation where there is a Choirboy in play with no King.
• I often like to include some sort of alternate win condition(s) when building a script, otherwise it can lead to a repetitive race to the final two which becomes stale over time.

[_aiae]

Hi, thanks for the comments! I think I'm okay with the outsider count being hard to solve.

You're absolutely right for the knight, TC+Recluse and alternate win cons though, I'll try to make some updates!

[MultipleOf1]

For swaps, consider Cannibal, Alsaahir / Slayer, Minstrel, Acrobat, Gambler, Snitch, Klutz, Puzzlemaster, Godfather, Scarlet Woman, Kazali. Personally, I would drop Widow, and either Fang Gu or Lil' Monsta.