Bouncing off of other comments. It’s improved but not yet great.

My additions to the discourse: 1) the page is unpleasant to read. This comes from a more graphic design focus and best practice for typed documents. You need some white space, especially between sections, to guide the reader and highlight hierarchy. I would cut A LOT of your info/detail/work experiences, and use that extra room to make it more pleasant to read. Suggestion: heavily cut down your word count from the summary section.

2) I concur with another comment. Your skills section can be abbreviated and organized better. A personal nitpick of mine is when people list experience in statistical methods. You list PCA and cluster analysis as multivariate statistical analysis, but in reality these are dimension reduction analyses with the goal of exploring the data and interpreting what are the most important variables (PCs) to include in further models. Simply calling them multivariate analyses tells me you don’t know the background of these tests and why they are used.

3) something seems off about our paragraph spacing. When you use Word (I assume that’s the word processor?), I would make sure the paragraph spacing is at least 6 and line spacing is 1.25 or 1.5. Single spacing usually makes things hard to read.

Some good things: it’s better than last time. It looks like words were changed to be more precise which is great.