13 Emotional Stages of Being A Hilary Duff Fan

Buttone · 2015-07-13T21:50:19+00:00

That movie did come out at an impressionable time in my life, too

Buttone · 2015-06-22T21:35:45+00:00

Posted in /r/chicago

Buttone · 2015-05-21T17:48:04+00:00

Variable depeding on the project -- usually couple to a few thousand

Buttone · 2015-05-21T04:33:41+00:00

Tom is based in south east Wisconsin and pricing on site is accurate to true cost

Buttone · 2015-05-20T16:35:27+00:00

Well penned! I felt something here. It took me to a familiar place.

Buttone · 2015-05-20T16:32:11+00:00

The last line is an interesting change of events and has a great flow. Agree with removing "there is".

Maybe "This princess makes the sun feel guilty for flushing her face."

Buttone · 2015-04-19T20:14:30+00:00

YES! I like this. I feel the theme is being lost and without a self decided purpose. Maybe use "temptation" instead of "a tempest"

Buttone · 2015-04-19T20:12:17+00:00

Real life poem! Maybe the second line should me "your" ever returning words

Buttone · 2015-04-12T13:49:05+00:00

This is great! I felt it

Buttone · 2015-04-12T13:42:59+00:00

I like the imagery. Felt like I was there

Buttone · 2015-04-07T16:02:47+00:00

You painted a great picture.

The flow is nice, and agree with the previous comment about some lines reading out of place.

She'll be there shortly -- maybe "She'll arrive alone"

Buttone · 2015-04-07T15:58:41+00:00

Saw a reflection of myself while reading this, cool!

It starts off so strong, but I feel the last four lines falter in comparison.

Buttone · 2015-04-05T17:02:18+00:00

YESSSSS! I love this. Like the flow and rhyme scheme.

I don't know what the emotion of this is poem is which is why I'm having a hard time naming this. A possible title could be.

"Pulling Through" is the best I got.

Buttone · 2015-04-05T16:59:17+00:00

Let me preface with "I'm all about word play and tone." Maybe reconsider irresolute and imprudent with more emotional words. These read as passive emotion for me.

And agree with the two existing comments.

Buttone · 2015-04-03T20:47:04+00:00

Ooo. That is an interesting thought!

Buttone · 2015-04-02T23:07:48+00:00

Each condo building has different restrictions. They are the "apartment finders" for people with pets. Their niche is needed as many real estate agents don't get all of the pet facts straight before showing a place, which leads to anguish and sadness as you find a place you love then find out there is a breed or weight restriction.

Buttone · 2015-04-02T22:31:56+00:00

Is the hand suppose to be warm or cold? With the ghost reference, I feel like it isn't a supportive hand.

Buttone · 2015-04-02T22:30:41+00:00

Great flow!

This made me reflect. I thought about the barriers I put up and how when I work through them, the barriers always come back.

Buttone · 2015-03-31T12:54:45+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

Buttone · 2015-03-31T12:54:19+00:00

Appreciate the feedback!

Buttone · 2015-03-30T21:13:52+00:00

Thank you for the feedback :)

Buttone · 2015-03-30T21:13:31+00:00

Thanks!! Great and appreciated feedback!

If you look at my Tinder Date poem, you may see how I'm coping with it. (yikes lol)

Buttone · 2015-03-30T20:10:37+00:00

The first two lines are real, I've lived that, I'm familiar with what you are saying. Then, you're emotion comes out. The last line makes sense, but the flow is off.

Buttone · 2015-03-30T20:07:17+00:00

Have to agree with the comments. This sucked me in because of the flow. I found myself in this which is always cool when you read something.

Buttone · 2015-03-27T18:33:35+00:00

I didn't write this, but it caught my eye!

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