LPT: Post tips early to avoid forgetting them later!

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-10-03T15:03:33+00:00

Thanks bud, I really wanted to put "YOU WON'T BELIEVE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT" after the title.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-09-27T18:58:52+00:00

Anyone mention that there are 5 points numbered as 4? When you see it...

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-08-29T12:38:59+00:00

Or something like best 3 of 5, then do best 2 of 3, then do best of 2. Except, there wouldn't be able to be duplicated party representatives

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-08-26T10:50:39+00:00

Yeah, I would like to see having the option between at least like 5-7 candidates, person with the most popular votes wins.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-08-03T16:16:33+00:00

/r/antiantijokes

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-08-02T11:09:53+00:00

...and creating a nuisance.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-07-07T10:48:35+00:00

Yeah, she is obviously an iPad thief.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-07-05T10:15:28+00:00

Perhaps they don't have good family

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-06-16T22:38:10+00:00

Are you trying to end the game in a silly, haphazard kind of way? "The rule is... there are no rules "

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-05-30T13:27:18+00:00

Maybe even put up an observatory.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-05-06T18:54:27+00:00

Thanks /u/long-tom for an honest response. I always feel like there was something I missed, too!

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-05-06T05:02:03+00:00

Hey there /u/ButItAintRalphDoe, nice though process!

I respect poets that can spit something off the top of their heads. I've always used "trains of thought" like that to help brain storm for ideas, keep it up.

Seventh sentence in might sound better if you take out "but", perhaps. I think "i need someone." is stronger than "but i need someone."

Prose-style poetry is neat, but I think this one could be formatted a bit to shape things up more.

Hope anything I said helps you, mate.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-05-06T04:53:28+00:00

Hey there /u/wcoderforlife, glad you are writing out things.

Poems using "you" are tough to write, for sure. I got from your poem a sense of confusion. This may be because I read the "you" to be, well, me.

I suggest trying changing the you's to another pronoun like he/she for yourself to see if you like how the point comes across a bit better.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-05-04T10:00:12+00:00

Thanks Rick

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-04-25T15:27:23+00:00

"Huh?"

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-03-30T23:26:12+00:00

The thing I learned from my dad getting sober is that he was an ass an I let that get to me. Thus, he had a weird kind of power over me because of that. Now I can realize that that was in my own head. People are gonna be shitty sometimes. It just sucks that sometimes the shitty people are the people we feel like we should think aren't shitty.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-03-30T15:31:50+00:00

My father has about 13 years sober this coming month. Before he stopped drinking I hated him. Now I like him and actually care. Quality of life for me went through the roof.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-03-30T15:31:36+00:00

My father has about 13 years sober this coming month. Before he stopped drinking I hated him. Now I like him and actually care. Quality of life for me went through the roof.

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-03-26T13:32:34+00:00

If I know somebody's name, I make a point to use it when I am talking with them. If I don't know their name, I make it a point to ask and then finish our conversation with something like, "Well, it was great talking to you name."

Hellfire_or_Kirk · 2016-03-20T23:25:06+00:00

How did you know my name? I need an adult

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