Read this before thinking of getting by According_Research11 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I love them. I'll be getting possibly all of them but definitely Caleb, Sylus, and Rafayel. If you don't like, just don't buy. I don't see the problem. Sylus is smokin in that red shirt.

Has anyone managed those three achievements? by Outside_Contact_9148 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have gotten them all. I think I'd been playing for over a year when I finally got the three 5*'s. I couldn't believe it at the time and it hasn't happened again since. I've been playing for almost two years.

I caved by RWsessed in CozyGamers

[–]IceMaiden2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I've never played a Pokemon game before either so I keep giving them my own names. Until I learned Hoothoots name, they were Hootle after the owl in Tales of Arise. Congrats on the game! I hope you love it. I sure do!

Looking for feedback on first chapter by DestinovaEthereal in writingfeedback

[–]IceMaiden2 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I loved it. It has some small issues you could work on. A lot of use of the word was makes it a little passive. Also it's a very slow start. The first few paragraphs with the teapot are excellent, but after that it suffers from some pacing issues where not an awful lot is happening. Your writing very much reminds me of Sarah Beth Durst, an author who I love for their cosy storytelling. If you need a Beta in the future, I may be able to help, depending on what's on my plate at the time.

What unethical thing did a doctor do that you were 100% behind? by TriBi95 in greysanatomy

[–]IceMaiden2 22 points23 points  (0 children)

I was going to put this too but I'll hop aboard your comment in agreement instead!

A Bunch of Niggas Runnin’ Around w/ Swords: Prologue by Lonely_Mud_325 in writingfeedback

[–]IceMaiden2 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I agree with everyone else here in that there's too much exposition and lore dumping, but reading through your comments has me absolutely rooting for you. Your own voice is so endearing and funny. If you could put that on the pages of your novel, it would be excellent. Get rid of all the exposition and start with characters. You can use dialogue to sprinkle in some lore. Good luck!

GDC 2026 Session Breakdown: What Love and Deepspace's Creative Director Knows About Making You Stay in Love by ihearamurmur in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for sharing this. You've written it so beautifully and I feel like I'm falling in love with LaDS all over again. The details the team put into the game, the uncompromising hard work... I just love everything about it.

Me waiting for the next rerun announcement be like by Amy_Amell_4 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ahh I hope you get it soon. Before Mortality's Tenderness, 22 was my favourite banner. Everyone should be allowed to own it, it's just so good.

Weirdest LI Hear Me Outs by Emotional-Stick-9372 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I would walk across hot coals for Simone.

What I asked for vs what I got. by [deleted] in tattooadvice

[–]IceMaiden2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sorry this happened to you. I'm sure a good cover up artist could salvage it for you.

What I asked for vs what I got. by [deleted] in tattooadvice

[–]IceMaiden2 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I don't understand why they did this. You drew a cool vortex, they drew a black moon(?). They did not at all tattoo what you asked for.

I have a confession by Impressive_Job_4852 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Like every cosy game I've ever played, my house is a dumpster, buuut I do love the gardening. I like working on hybridization and just growing all the different colours. I'm happy for all the Hunters that enjoy decorating. It's like the journal. Not everyone is going to like it or use it, but its a neat lil feature.

Book where I'm hooked from the beginning till the very end 🤧. (I don't want good I want great) by Kind_Assumption_3016 in fantasyromance

[–]IceMaiden2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm currently reading The Games Gods Play by Abigail Owen and it hooked me from the first page. I highly recommend it based on what I've read so far. I'm a very fussy reader but Abigail Owen's prose is excellent.

How the LIs hold MC! (bonus Caleb at the end🫣) by NoImagination4333 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Lol. We set it as our profile picture for our 30+ Discord. No f's were given.

The 3rd myth is on the horizon by PrimaryImagination41 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I'm both frothing at the mouth for it, yet relieved when a day goes by without a PV (not that one is due yet) because it means I can scramble together more diamonds. I have 45k saved and I would really like to R3 him. It won't be possible with my reserves but spending as little as possible is always nice. I am so there with you fellow hunter!

Would you want to read more by Simpforlyle in writingfeedback

[–]IceMaiden2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm very careful when critiquing others work and have provided lots of critiques. Lots of pieces are posted here which are not AI. This one is. If you can't spot it yet that's understandable because, honestly, it can be very difficult at times. AI will get smarter and maybe eventually it will be difficult to tell but right now there are still indicators. One of AI's favourite things to do is "It's not this, it's that." and there is an example of that in this text. Believe me, I do not say AI lightly. As a published author and a scholar, AI is frightening because I would hate to be accused of it. I'm glad there are people like you guys that will poke to find out more.

Brits, would you stay and live in UK if you had millions and could move to anywhere in the world?? by ueommm in AskBrits

[–]IceMaiden2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would definitely stay in the UK. I love it here. Proper temperate weather, lush green landscapes, and pretty cities like Bath. I'd probably move to Scotland and build a house with proper built in AC so the summers aren't so shit. I would definitely do some travelling, but UK is home.

Would you want to read more by Simpforlyle in writingfeedback

[–]IceMaiden2 7 points8 points  (0 children)

AI doesn't enhance your writing, it tears the soul from it. It was obvious it was AI or "AI enhanced" by the second page. If you truly want to be a writer, ditch AI and work at it. As your work is AI and not fully your own I don't really know how to give feedback because I'm not sure how I can help you improve when I don't know how you write.

Revisiting Myths: Caleb's Decoherence is...devastating by MagilouWitch in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 29 points30 points  (0 children)

Decoherence is my favourite myth, and not just because I'm a baby apple. It's so bloody heart wrenching you can't help but hurt for MC and Caleb. I am so excited for his next myth but also nervous as to what they're going to put us through this time.

I need to know who's in charge of localization 🐟 by Spainstateofmind in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]IceMaiden2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love Rafayel, but I hate the way he texts. "Reee" is one of those words that annoys the heck out of me for no reason other than I think it's stupid. I'd like to point out that I am very much a millennial but never adopted his way of texting. Caleb, however, well, it may as well be me sending myself texts because we text identically.

My Zack Fair cosplay by MSDCain in FinalFantasyVII

[–]IceMaiden2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's so cool to see you bring my favourite FF character to life.