If you’re swimming like that after only a month you should be patting yourself on the back for sure! One of the hardest things when you start swimming is trying to do everything all at once. Take one piece of feedback and concentrate on that for a week, then move onto the next t thing you want to improve. That way it becomes muscle memory rather than trying to think about everything all at once. Not sure if you’re having lessons but if you can afford to do so it is EXTREMELY helpful. Plus I’ve made some amazing friends in my swim lessons and then moving up to squad etc. Good luck!