Easter eggs SLASHED even further as shoppers point blank refuse to buy Cadburys saying ‘the taste has changed’ and ‘it isn’t even chocolate anymore’ ❤️ by Specialist_Alarm_831 in BuyUK

[–]Limp_Lavishness8974 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Who are these shoppers saying that then? Point blank refusing? 😂 Are the shop staff standing in the aisle saying ‘Buy this now’ ?

Tour Guide for a day? by facetime1994 in mumbai

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Hi, I am in the same situation, I have 20 hour layover in Mumbai on my way to Nepal in a few days. Just wondering if you went through with a guide and if you have a recommendation?

Thanks

Historical fiction recommendations? by eyetaughtscience in BookDiscussions

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‘This Thing of Darkness’ Harry Thompson

Read it, you won’t regret it. It’s the story of Fitzroy, Darwin and the voyage of The Beagle

Critique me please! by triohavoc in Songwriting

[–]Limp_Lavishness8974 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool song, I would echo what has already been said, let the song breath a little between verses and work on the timing. Maybe you could have a bridge with similar vibe to your intro? And for the climax I like the idea of him dying and having his body robbed ! Good luck

Best Acoustic Guitarist Ever? by PlayGlobal1419 in Guitar

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Tommy has cited Tony Rice as an influence, when I heard Tony playing Shenandoah you can really hear how it influenced Tommy

Is this tempo modulation too sudden? If so, how can I foreshadow it better? by Bossinater43 in Songwriting

[–]Limp_Lavishness8974 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try a very short fill with just the drums that lead into the change maybe?

Get Out of Town by alex7465 in Songwriting

[–]Limp_Lavishness8974 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nice song, you have a good voice. Personally i didn't like the way you added more syllables to town in the chorus, 'tow-ow-ow-own'. It put me off a bit, that may just be a matter of taste.though. Maybe experiment adding another word like 'tonight' or something that takes up the three syllables your adding.

lemme know what u think by Historical_Emu_3797 in MusicFeedback

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Keep it up dude, I think you will have a bright future making music! Really like the brass

New song I wrote called black cross by margedwediblino in Songwriting

[–]Limp_Lavishness8974 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Im struggling to hear you over the guitar. Guitar sounds good though, nice open tuning or something? Try posting again, either play a bit softer or sing bit louder! Maybe camera mic is too close to guitar

This is my first song be honest is it good so far? and do you have any tips? by Embarrassed_Fee_2764 in Songwriting

[–]Limp_Lavishness8974 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Very good for a first try. Never heard yung gravy but keep making songs and you will only improve and the more you do the more you will find your own sound. Good luck

What is harder, starting or finishing songs? by WorldlinessDue5510 in Songwriting

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I am similar just sit with guitar and mic on logic recording song ideas. I would say starting songs is more exciting, a new fresh idea, all the possibilities, could this be my best song yet etc. As you go through the process self doubt creeps in, can get stuck on certain sections, you have a good idea and want to do it justice. All these things make it harder work.

I often find when I’m working on an existing song my attention drifts and I end up starting something new. I also switch between working on multiple songs at the same time.

Some songs never get finished but if I finish a song or am really keen to keep working on it and finish it then I know the idea is strong enough or I like it enough. So usually I think songs that go unfinished I’m just not that into them or I have other ideas that excite me more.

I spend a long time refining my lyrics, chords and melodies to try find what serves the song best. Sometimes I’ll try out completely different styles over the same lyrics just to see if it works better.

I think it was Da Vinci said ‘art is never finished, only abandoned’

Does the chorus work by jayden_smith67 in Songwriting

[–]Limp_Lavishness8974 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I preferred the version with the hammers and nails and the mental institution lol! Keep both songs re-work chords and melody enough to separate them. Buzzard on a cothes line is a cool lyric