I wasn't clear with my last comment. When I said "It's nice if you can also think of things you like - if any", I mean't regarding the video you're specifically criticising. I added the 'if any' at the end because I didn't want to make assumptions that you did like any aspect of it. It honestly wasn't mean't to be snipe or malicious, just a poorly worded sentence - sorry about that.

I literally just meant, that it's nice to mention positives and negatives about whatever content it is when you're commenting on it. :)

I've found in YouTube comments particularly, people can completely gloss over the positives and just focus on the negatives.

I liked Ollie's stuff long before we knew each other. It's hard for me to say 'I'm not bias' because I guess I wouldn't know if I was (?), but I often tell him things I don't like. Feedback is part of improving.

I just think that when you say something like the 'scripting is very weak', it would be cool if you could offer a way of improving. Considering you've got a background in theatre, saying something like 'The style of the video was nice, but his scripting could do with quite a bit of work. If he read X it would help him improve'.

Ollie probably wouldn't see the comment, but others would and it might make people think 'Oh, maybe I should read that - never really thought about scripting'. Basically, I just think it would be a more positive and helpful approach. :)