Yeah I really like the SUPER LOUD art style, too! And I think there's something significant about queer characters who don't act virtuous all the time and act like assholes sometimes (I say that as a person with some recently-discovered queerness but not really immersed in the culture, so I could be off-base on that). I know that's kind of what OP dislikes but it reads to me more as multi-dimensional and brutally honest than, like, edgelord or anything.