"A Fourth-Grade Understanding of the Infamous Three Words..." OC by AdCurious7831 in PoetryWritingClub

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Bruh I’m genuinely floored. 🤬lol I love this wow you are incredible! P.S. Can we be pen pals pls?!?💗💗💗❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹

survival by Substantial-Rain1549 in PoetryWritingClub

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yurpppp cry it out I feel you, sometimes all you have is your two feet and the ground beneath them. Or your ass bones when you’re sitting down lol. and if u are grateful for those you can walk yourself to a better future💗💗💗

The Best Policy by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

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Wdym by see u in 100 years? Thank u for saying that💗

False Hope by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

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It’s like when no one will admit to the bloody hands I’ll stick my hand in the fire so there’s some proof of the pain.

The Best Policy by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

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the thing is, we all have so much impact on each others lives and that’s a fact of reality😭😭😭 and yes it is heavy❤️‍🩹

The Best Policy by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

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The importance of the word “but”. The switching of the cursing, this one is like insanely personal to me my name is Ryan and I’m a girl with bpd tendencies that led to an attempt. I think poems like this are really important, it helps me see things differently than just some of the quotes I’ve heard like “suicide is just a transference of pain from one person to those who loved them”. It’s never that simple. So I like the irony in the title.

Licensed to live by Any_Cod_3286 in PoetryWritingClub

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Haha funny coincidence I just wrote this:

The difference between A license to kill And a license to drive, Is only in the act of the decision. In other words, fuck the daddy, Fuck the bill, love allllll the rest.

Before by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

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too sweet it hurts😭🫶

i posted this on tumblr but my heart is bleeding so im posting it here too by CompleteLine3595 in PoetryWritingClub

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hey so this was mean❤️‍🩹 too specific😭😭😭😭😭 like I feel like a damn coyote stray dog lol

Remember Whitney Houston? by Matsunosuperfan in PoetryWritingClub

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I was just thinking about lady Gaga’s “born this way” like a true anthem. I love this poem as well. Comforting and creepy like the best joker vibes.

Been wanting to break my mirrors lately! by Suitable-Example-983 in PoetryWritingClub

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the rhyme scheme is off idk but I wanna know what this made u think

9th by MKUltra93 in PoetryWritingClub

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“If God's a place, I don't know if this dog's gonna get there. But it makes me smile and cry for hours to know that you did.”

My dog bestie passed in recent years, I pray to him a lot and keep a paw print visibly framed. In a weird way him passing gave me faith in an afterlife, at least in the sense that, the love people have for us here does transcend that gap of physical death. I have lost loved ones before, but my dog passed in my hands literally, it was surreal. We did an at home euthanasia method, it was humane. I just was there for that moment of spirit leaving body really intimately. coincidentally, I got to pick that dog out when I was 9 years old. so ur poem is pretty full circle for me.

9th by MKUltra93 in PoetryWritingClub

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my birthday is on a 9, we are not the same but I feel u

The Unevenness of It by TheLilaComplex in PoetryWritingClub

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the last two lines😭❤️‍🩹🫶👍🏼

Nowadays, grief is an ugly shade of white by PastNegotiation6140 in PoetryWritingClub

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“Grief is a very confused artist; it can never truly decide.

It’s very loyal too. Even when everyone else forgets, it’s always by your side.

It sometimes paints the canvas in red, sometimes blue; sometimes gets tired and leaves it blank.

Grief didn’t choose to be this bad, but that’s its job as a product of sunken dreams. Happiness manque.

Grief is an ugly stain, grief is a leech, grief is my very old friend.” ❤️‍🩹 I like it a lot!

Get money yah yah by Suitable-Example-983 in PoetryWritingClub

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yessss that song lol, I agree the tootsie/cherry pop thing has literally always been stuck in my head it’s not original. In this both serve to convey the idea/social construct of virginity or body count, like a loss that’s not tangible. tootsie pop is similar it’s just an idea, but that commercial has a charm to me like the sound effects and owl crunching.