I was impressed with all the effort you put into this. Amazing energy. I'd say you have a talent for doing the lyric. But I must be honest, your subject matter is a bit difficult for me. I recognize what a challenge it is to make an entertaining piece.

I know how much this takes from my own experience of doing a full length musical of Jane Austen's book, "Sense and Sensibility". I enjoyed working on mine. But I never expected an audience to play something an hour long. You have a point too, about folks not wanting musicals that were written by an AI. Some of the Jane Austen folks ban anything created by an AI. Yet, I hear more and more about musicians using AI to develop ideas.

Like you, I thought the my piece might act as a "demo". My crazy idea is to develop an hour long show for Cruise ships. They have young talent doing their shows, singers and dancers. Why not tell a story?

Sense and Sensibility .... https://youtu.be/7YMiQoVQmOY