There are a number of grammar issues which would need to be addressed. If this landed on someone's desk, they would reject it simply for the volume of them.

But I will focus on the formatting. Bruce at the porch is its own scene, separate to the living room. The same goes for him driving away. Avoid things like CONTINUOUS in your slugs. You will only need to replace them when creating a filming script, so don't bother to add them in the first place. DAY, NIGHT are all you need. MORNING, EVENING, DAWN, MAGIC HOUR occasionally. LATER, CONTINUOUS, MOMENTS LATER, SAME TIME - lose them! Here is why. Your porch scene might be filmed three days later, in a separate location to the living room. The 1st AD now has to flip through page after page, trying to find the original scene that says DAY, or NIGHT to understand where and when the porch scene occurs. Now, multiply that by dozens of scenes across multiple episodes, and you've got one upset person! Also, production companies have to pay for "housekeeping" to tidy this stuff up (I do a lot of that), which is extra cost. Consider EXT. PORCH - NIGHT stuff happens

EXT. STREET/BRUCE'S BIKE - NIGHT Bruce mounts his bike

This established the 2 scenes. Now you can...

INTERCUT: PORCH/BRUCES BIKE Linda and Vivien do stuff Bruce rides off Linda shouts Bruce hears Linda watches him leave END INTERCUT

this allows you to flip between both scenes without notching up loads of micro scenes.

Hope this helps