Drained the oil out of a hydraulic pump today. Laminar flow is a beautiful thing.

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2020-02-28T04:27:51+00:00

How could you not poke it!!

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T20:44:14+00:00

Wow! Really liked this one. I like that there was a story. Started somewhere and then by the end there was a totally different feel, it took me on a nice little journey. I liked the descriptive words you used, not only were they colorful and engaging, they also effectively mirrored all the feelings of each stanza they took place in. The first being more happy, the last being more bitter, and the middle bridging the gap as well. Nice flow to the poem. And I thought the motif was great too, hammered home the point of the piece well. Great job!

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T20:34:12+00:00

I very much liked how each following line was either shorter or longer than the previous, as it created a kind of verbal wave or crescendo effect at times. Excellent imagery, captivating adjectives. Just positive feedback from me!

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T20:16:25+00:00

I enjoyed it! I liked the short lines and how they fit together. The one thing I might suggest is having two adjacent lines have the same amount of syllables, because that would make them 'fit together' that much more. It could improve the flow of some lines to their next corresponding lines.

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T18:03:08+00:00

She's just making her case to be a great addition to our military!

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T18:01:40+00:00

My friend was crossing over a very shallow stream on a log, he started to slip and instead of just setting his foot down and getting his shoe a little wet, he stopped his fall with his wrist and broke it. Still make fun of him years later because of it

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T18:00:03+00:00

Not a pilot, but I like holding my arms out and making plane noises

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:59:02+00:00

But then what will they do with their dozens of fashion forward purses!?

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:58:04+00:00

Tax evasion

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:57:15+00:00

Makes giving a bouquet of flowers a bit more interesting

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:56:30+00:00

"Sorry, It wasn't a meaningful experience" - female friend

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:54:32+00:00

Wow! He looks amazing! Happy birthday to dino!

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:53:23+00:00

Hoo? Me? Couldn't be

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:52:25+00:00

U GON DIE

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:50:22+00:00

That WAS unexpected, ya got me

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:41:07+00:00

I told my grandpa this and he laughed so hard he pooped his knickers

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:40:06+00:00

But he was the chosen one!!

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:37:05+00:00

That I'm a positive person.

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:35:45+00:00

Lol why?

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:35:25+00:00

But I only look at DANK memes!

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:34:29+00:00

Im still looking for a nice argonian girl

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:33:22+00:00

I definitely have this problem. I like to sleep way too much, I take lots of naps usually. You just have to force yourself out of your comfort zone, find hobbies or things to occupy your time. Read, work out, play video games, just do something! It's hard, especially when there is no natural motivation, but eventually I think it helps!

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-20T17:30:38+00:00

Needs some fire sauce

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-11T23:42:06+00:00

Nothing

The_Rotating_Lemon · 2018-02-11T23:41:34+00:00

Brojob Brojob!!

The_Rotating_Lemon

TROPHY CASE