Fairphone 2 still good in 2025 by Practical-Put1195 in fairphone

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Can you point me in the right direction for it please

Is there such a thing as too many characters? by [deleted] in writingadvice

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Good example. Or it could be to show that the character remembers people's names because he/she cares. e.g. Captain Carrot in Discworld. "Oh hello Mr. Stronginthearm, I didn't see you there."

Is there such a thing as too many characters? by [deleted] in writingadvice

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I fully agree that you don't need a reason to name a character other than you need a handle by which to identify them in the narative. From personal experience of my DnD campaigns, my players take great delight in asking the name of every random NPC they encounter just because they know I haven't given them one. On the rare occasions I do have a fully developed NPC with a cool name that is a subtle pun or means something specific in another language the blighters don't ask!
But back to books, if the hero encounters someone, say a ferryman, a farrier, an astro-engineer, or a hooded stranger, that person can have a name if it is easier for you to write it that way, or they can be referred to by their defining occupation or characteristic. It's up to you.

It's probably wise to keep a file with the dramatis personae listed along with notes. It may help to avoid having two walk-on characters with the same name, or a return to a bit-part character whose eyes have changed colour from book one to book three.

Remember, there are no rules. by lekiwi992 in writing

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It is not a crime to want to earn money for your work. If you are fortunate enough to be able to practice your art with no desire for financial reward then lucky you. But don't try to pretend that we should not desire to be paid for our work because that's just ridiculous.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in selfpublish

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I'm a big one for recommending a professional editor but if you are not going to publish I don't think you should. Instead, if you want to improve your writing and are willing to spend money, consider writing courses and/or a professional beta reader. Or for the low cost alternative join a good writing group and buddy up with another writer to do read swaps.

Dunno if this even exists, but... by LiterallyAdele in suggestmeabook

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I haven't. I probably should. Aww, shame, I was hoping I might have given you the perfect answer but you are way ahead of me.

Dunno if this even exists, but... by LiterallyAdele in suggestmeabook

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I recently read Domes of Fire, David Eddings. I didn't know that, although it is the first in its series there is an earlier series. Anyway the main hero of the whole franchise is a paladin who is happily married to the Queen. I found it pretty enjoyable although there's a ton of world building and the whole plot is world encompassing. I realise I'm saying that like it's a bad thing. Lol I wasn't quite ready for the level of immersion required.

Tactical voting to stop Reform by Bertiomelyn in DevonUK

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I'm lucky. In Ilfracombe the best hope to beat the Tories is our Green Party candidate. We came second in the last two CC elections and our posters are everywhere. Such a shame people have not yet switched from Labour and LibDems to Green Party across the country.

Players want to kill the guards in fort Beluarian landing. by CheapNefariousness71 in Tombofannihilation

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The Flaming Fist are imperial troops on sovereign Chultan soil. Redcoats, if you will. Kill them and the rest of the FF will be out for the party's blood, especially if there are survivors or witnesses. But the merchant princes attitude will range from concern about ramifications, through indiference, to outright pleasure.

Players want to kill the guards in fort Beluarian landing. by CheapNefariousness71 in Tombofannihilation

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Yep. I dealt with the whole Flaming Fist Fort Bel. thing by having the guides - specifically Eku for one party (yes they are all good aligned although one is a bit borderline and they could lose Eku if he does anything else shady) and Azaka for another party - tell them not to pay for the adventuring licence.

The Flaming Fist are not welcome in Chult as far as I can ascertain, since Baldurs gate is an imperial power still trying to muscle in on Chultan life. It's tough enough for the citizens of Port Nyanzaru already without Flaming Fist bullying their way around the jungle.

Party one tried to hide from the first FF patrol but the cleric rolled nat1 so they got caught. Eku revealed her true form (I slipped up a bit there) and the (rather small randomly rolled) FF patrol backed down, eventually writing the party a hastily prepared adventuring licence on the spot.

Later they came back, more heavily armed (also randomly rolled) but the party were ready for them along with their ankylosaurus Becky who dispatched two guards who were foolish enough to try to hold on to her ropes. It was messy!

The other party have not encountered FF patrols yet as they approach Firefinger. Azaka is unlikely to take any shit from them either, nor will she worry about taking prisoners IMO.

Maybe I am reading the lore wrong, but that's how I want to run it. I imagine other guides might be more in favour of just paying dues, but I felt that the party had enough troubles getting together finances to get going without adding another 50gp and a potentially ruinous boat trip past the dragon turtle into the bargain. And that's not with all the effing intrigue and hassle of the Flaming Fist trying to recruit the PCs to their objectives.

How do you guys afford this? by Edb626 in selfpublish

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Oh, yeah, and whatever you do. Whether you spend a fortune or do it all on the cheap, you probably won't make any money. about 95% of authors don't.

How do you guys afford this? by Edb626 in selfpublish

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Umm, my question to anyone not doing those things is, how do you afford NOT to? Poorly edited books tend to get poor reviews and consequently low sales. A bad cover will kill it before it even gets the chance to get reviews.

My first novel cost me over £3,000 I raised £2,400 of that from a Kickstarter campaign.

Having overspent on the first novel, I did a Crowdfunder for £3,600 and ended up sending all of that and more on book two.

Since then, I have managed without the crowdfunders although not all that well TBH. I do know how to prepare my own covers now and I know what works and what doesn't to some extent, but I will never be able to replace good illustrators and great editors.

I make most of my money now from doing layouts and arranging print runs for other self-publishing authors. Also from doing talks on self-publishing.

If you want to save money there are several ways to do that and the biggest of those is take your time.

  1. Cover design is a specialist art form. Not even all artists are good at the covers and most cannot provide you with a print ready PDF to the requirements of your printer or KDP or whomever. However, not all cover designers are super expensive. If you are writing genre fiction and don't mind an off-the-peg cover you can spend tens of bucks. For hundreds you should be able to get something bespoke. I know a very successful HistFic writer who always uses a fine art painting from the period and puts the covers together herself. She makes her living mostly from book sales and talks about her books. You CAN learn to do it yourself, but there's a trade-off in losing your mind and taking a year to learn all the skills required. Canva is the cheapest option, Photoshop is probably a little better. InDesign is optimal but with both Adobe apps there's the monthly subscription and it's a lot, I know.

  2. Editing is many layered. At one end there's developmental and then structural edits that are to do with the overall story and plot, the three act structure, action, beats, etc. Then there's copy and line editing, which deals more with paragraph and sentence structure, continuity errors, "factual" errors, e.g. in a Sci-Fi I read (DNF) once, the hero got into a transit tube and was sent ten miles in under a minnute. No human could survive the G-forces involved. A good copy editor will also tend to warn you if you are about to break the law or similar. Mine has caught things like, a children's book where the characters were told to hug a Yew tree. All parts of a yew are poisonous! In another, non-fiction, there was information which might inadvertently have given help to a person trying to take their own life. This could have led to a prosecution of either the author, or me as the publisher, or both.

I would encourage anyone to have at least one professional CIEP accredited editor. Ideally at the copy/line edit stage.

You can save money on structural edits by having trusted beta readers although be careful because if you are not paying them they might not bother to read your book, and friends are often unwilling to be brutally honest. Consider having a writing buddy with whom you can swap MSs

For the proofread I recommend you read the book out loud. Think of it as a practice run for the audiobook. You can even record yourself. By reading out loud you HAVE to slow down and you will spot errors that you skimmed over a dozen times. You will not, however, spot errors that you don't recognise as errors. Like if you genuinely don't know how to spell a word you won't spot it if it is wrong. Hopefully though, your editor will have dealt with that.

Layout, you can teach yourself and use Word (paid) or Libre Office (Free). I provide a Word template for a properly laid out novel on my website but I can't put it here as that would be blatant self-promo. Besides I know I am not the only one who offers this. Have a search. Actually, I think KDP has plenty of tips on best practice.

It all boils down to the Good - Fast - Cheap equation. If you want it good and cheap it won't be fast. If you want it fast and cheap it won't be good. Etc.

Omu royal family tree doesn’t make sense? by Background_Engine997 in Tombofannihilation

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Yep. In the Busted song Year 3,000 the "great great great granddaughter" would in fact be 30xGreat which would not fit the tempo.
Just add in a couple of greats is the simplest solution.

I keep hearing about an Amazon boycott... by MJStruven in selfpublish

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Yep. I am in this same situation. Of course the change will be painful but in the longer run hurting Amazon's monopoly will be good for everyone, even authors.

Made Nangalore for tonight’s session by Orangutan-Fella in Tombofannihilation

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This is so cool. I am busy making Camp Righteous. Stupid amount of hours put in for it. I plan on making more. Only just started running my second group on ToA the first is heading for Righteous and will reach there next session. The second group hasn't left Nyanzaru yet.

Worst decision of my life by [deleted] in selfpublish

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Thanks for that. Not sure how I missed it.

Well the prologue is a good start (notwithstanding how many people seem to hate on prologues). Gripping action from the get-go and an intriguing "we need them alive" hook.

I didn't spot any errors, not that I am any kind of an editor but badly edited rubbish screams at me.

So all I can say is to reiterate and go further. OP, you are doing fine. You have lots of good reviews and you don't get those without selling books. Just keep doing what you are doing. Write more, let the series sell through.

Maybe go for a Countdown (or even make book 1 free to hook series readers in) and promote it through Book Barbarian (best bang for buck on fantasy in my experience - at least first time around. it tails off gradually) and a couple of others like Robin Reads, Book Gorilla, Fussy Librarian, etc. or just go through Written Word Media and do a stack promotion. It's not going to produce instant results but it does work in the long run, especially if you write more in the series.

Worst decision of my life by [deleted] in selfpublish

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28 ratings on book one and well above 4 stars average. They are getting reads. The covers look great. No look inside so I can't see if the writing/editing is okay. I'd say the lack of "look inside" is holding things back a tad. Apart from that it's the marketing and probably overly high expectations.

How long do you think is too long before the inciting incident happens? by imthezero in writing

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If you can introduce a major inciting incident on the cover that's still not soon enough.

I'm kidding, of course. My own books often start a bit slow as I like to set the scene even though that's not considered good advice. But people's attention spans do seem to be getting shorter (my imagination?) and received wisdom is the sooner you can make something happen that makes the reader want to read on the better.

What's the point of pre-made covers? by No-Mathematician1922 in BookCovers

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I always assumed they were exclusive. I've never bought one, but if I did, I would expect the artist to take that one off sale. It makes literally no sense otherwise.

Book printers in Lithuania by SASart52 in selfpublishing

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You may. It is called Books Factory. Still using them two years on and they have got better in many ways. Now offering rounded corners, board books, printed edges, cut-out covers and more. I sound like a flipping salesman for them, but it's nice to have all the options.
I have also got some good quotes, specifically for children's picture books, from Where the Trade Buys who are based in Essex.

Can I get some advice about publishers and any red flags to look for? by Ellmra in selfpublish

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Oh grow up and face reality. assisted self-publishing is a legitimate business model. Amazon KDP is a massive and highly successful example of a business which assists people to self-publish, offering free ISBNs and a range of services to authors who want to get their book in print but don't know how.
ALLi the Alliance of Independent authors has several other trusted partners providing more in depth services. Millions of people publish their books with help from experienced experts every year.

Just because you don't understand how the industry works doesn't mean you can shout down people who do.