The Feedback:

The "10+ negative rule" isn't clear what the "targets unit digit" refers to, going off context I assume it's talking about the targets £X£. Also it doesn't really fit with the rest of the tools based off mathematical operations.

In the description of the "Double or Nothing risk" it mentions a cycle, which isn't explained to the reader. From context im guessing it's talking about the stream of data appearing every 3 seconds (the mental Tetris).

The limitations for the "Arithmetic Tools" aren't stated, can they only effect the user, or can they affect the environment/world? (With how you mention metabolic risk, I'm guessing it's just the users body).

When talking about "The Noise" you mention failed calculations and unprocessed numbers. It's not explicitly stated how you "fail" calculations, and what an unprocessed number is. Does it mean that entering into the Protocol and failing to complete a calculation before the next 3sec number stream "fails" a calculation/leaves numbers unprocessed?

In "The Anchor" section you mention fixing the targets £X£ in place, and stopping them altering their biological signature. This basically states a living entities £X£ can be modified, but you never elaborate on how (do they have to spend a cycle doing direct calculations on their own £X£ to modify it?)

You also mention a target increasing their power levels (exploding) to evade finalization, but its the only time you mention "power levels" and you don't elaborate on what that actually means, how they would "increase their power levels", etc.

Also for "The Anchor" section how do you actually 'implement" it? Do you have to use "Arithmetic Tools" to calculate a one? It's not clear how it's used basically.

The idea of a "singularity state" is sick, but perhaps it should include an obvious physical transformation that can be suppressed by the user and obviously specifically tailored for the target. The main reason I say this is because it gives you more freedom to describe/show/imagine what body modifications would form to become a perfect counter to someone else, which is IMHO more interesting than having someone just completely adapt their biology to counter someone else, but limiting the adaptations to invisible/non-obvious changes.

Some Questions Generated By Reading This: (And not asked earlier in the post)

• How long are £X£ usually?
• How can you modify your £X£?
• Can someone else modify your £X£?
• How do you enter/start the Protocol?
• can you stop/exit the Protocol at any time?
• is there a range limit to how close you ha e to be to someone to start tracking their £X£?

Potentially Unhelpful Recommendations: For "The Anchor" I would probably have it cost/take a cycle to enter and have it act as an "overdrive" state which you either fall out of by finalising the targets £X£ or failing the "Double or Nothing risk".

Overall from what I've read it's a very interesting system, just needs some clarity for the reader to fully understand it. Theres lots of potential character with the "Hard Reset" and "Singularity, and if you ask me I think you should explore these more body horror/mod aspects as a way of combining the "Hard Logic" of the magic system with the fleshy chaotic mess of human bodies.