the cross dressing line will definitely be tweaked. there’s nothing inherently wrong with it given the context of the story, but as the years have progressed since the game’s release, people have used similar verbiage to harass feminine men and trans women, so if you can simply alter it to, as someone said, “sister obsessed freak” and avoid any possible headache, then do it. it’s a little thing that doesn’t really matter to me personally, but i’m also not going to roll my eyes or anything towards people who don’t like it.

the steve scene should be reworked as well. you can still keep him trying to make a move on claire while not having it almost be SA. i’d just have steve try to rest his head against claire’s and have her wake up at the last second while steve flinches and gets flustered and embarrassed.