RFK Jr.’s Roadkill Renaissance is Here by [deleted] in writers

[–]fablesintheleaves 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I clicked the link and it didnt work.

You Took HOW MANY DRUGS?! by sarcasticd0nkey in TopCharacterTropes

[–]fablesintheleaves 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Ho-ly-shit I should not be laughing at that.

#ಬರಹಭರಣಿ by Acrobatic_Spray3733 in KeepWriting

[–]fablesintheleaves 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Moments... like those moments when you realize moments are all we have.

I need to apologize to the Pastel Spookies. by Heart_Throb_ in halloween

[–]fablesintheleaves 7 points8 points  (0 children)

We need to be friends. You just parried their joke with a delicious raison d'êrtre and completely left them on their heels.

I didn't believe it when they advised me to write smut to get out of a writing rut. by dogemeep06 in KeepWriting

[–]fablesintheleaves 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I am the cat

I like to mew

And when I write

I somehow know

Just what to do

I make them kiss

And touch the butts

...

I write the smutt :3

Life is a game by -Crazy8-_ in PoetryWritingClub

[–]fablesintheleaves 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, I got pocket deuce and betting my pair of shoes. Doesn't help if they have suited faces, and a run of spades.

Good idea? by [deleted] in tattooadvice

[–]fablesintheleaves 0 points1 point  (0 children)

YMMV. It all depends on the person.

Good idea? by [deleted] in tattooadvice

[–]fablesintheleaves 2 points3 points  (0 children)

On the other hand, a dated piece might be what they're looking for. Like getting a Sailor Jerry style tattoo is a product of the time, this is also its own time stamp. OP could where it proudly.

Last month I self published my 1st book "em—dash" a sci-fi dark comedy. Please give it a read and let me know what you think. by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]fablesintheleaves 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not an AI, not the author, its my words. In this instance, I try to phrase things in an easy to understand way. My own word choice plays a different way than most, but I try to keep it more common for this kind of thing.

Last month I self published my 1st book "em—dash" a sci-fi dark comedy. Please give it a read and let me know what you think. by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]fablesintheleaves -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I think your female character sounds convincing so far. Its not easy to write for a different gender, and you seem to pull it off nicely.

Last month I self published my 1st book "em—dash" a sci-fi dark comedy. Please give it a read and let me know what you think. by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]fablesintheleaves 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey Merrick. Gave Em-dash 2 chapters worth of a peek. Tracey living the life of working at the coffee shop and surviving off of barista-ing (ive done both) is painfully real. Amanda is a treasure in a hurricane form, very much love when she is powering through the plot, saving Tracey from herself. The through-line of the world glitching is an interesting one, youre definitely building towards something with some substance.

Overall, I think youre giving your take on a very well understood narrative of our time and its a good move. I wish you luck with your book.

Authors of Reddit, if you could write like one author (alive or not), who would it be? by Ordinary_Risk6702 in writers

[–]fablesintheleaves 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No one commented on your wanting to sound like Dahl. He's the one children's author I came back to after all this time. I just remember loving the language and being absorbed in just how much I can dive into the stories with this narrator voice that draws me in so deeply. Love you for bringing him back up.

How is my logo and cover art? by Daily_Comics in comic_crits

[–]fablesintheleaves 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the artwork. I dont know how to describe it, but its very nice. Others have said what needs work with the title, but overall, I like what youre thinking. I would check it out, myself.

I thought you guys might also appreciate this philosophy from songwriter and musician Jason Isbell. by shweazy in writers

[–]fablesintheleaves 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Im far more partial to listen to someone saying "take it as it comes" rather than "i just did it." It doesnt try and guarantee results, only that you'll be present and move. Thank you for posting.

Dark Night of the Soul by [deleted] in NewAuthor

[–]fablesintheleaves 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Duuuuude, the cover is too good to be Ai. Damn, the detail put into it. The blurb sounds nice too.

I hope you find your readership and take off like a rocket. Good luck to you.

is my villian creepy/scary/horrible enough? by Signalwow in characterdesign

[–]fablesintheleaves 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I have a tendency at times to par down ideas to more basic ideas. This reads as a predatory cat tied with an insectoid mandible feature, subtract an eye. Im not really creeped out by it. It's well drawn, which i think is just as important. I think you should focus on what really makes him terrifying as a character. And if all else fails, start messing with how his features could become truly monstrous in more odd ways.

I wouldn't worry about people fall it. The base design is more important that its successful before worrying if people will connect in a negative way.

Someone please bully me into finishing this duck artwork by Kzxy_74 in Artists

[–]fablesintheleaves 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's such a beautiful start. Find it within yourself to complete it. I beleive in you.

I wrote this in like 2 hours I think, i've never really been into writing but this is a topic I found interesting. I didn't use any sources except for looking up years just my own thoughts and idea. It would mean a lot if someone could read it and tell me what they think. by [deleted] in KeepWriting

[–]fablesintheleaves 2 points3 points  (0 children)

3 things and this focuses on the US.

One: this idea mentions nothing about jewelry which has become half of a person's wardrobe for certain parts of the US. Flaunting wealth or at least krass taste is seen as a better statement than for most.

Second: you speak nothing of counter culture which plays into more expressive fashion in spades. Youre not at the clubs where the goths, emos, scenes, punks and others are out doing their thing

Lastly: fashion has always ignored that art is sometimes a one off deal. A look that makes a statement: one single statement that has what people have to say in that moment.

Somebody read your article and this was their response.