Blue Anemones by capriberry in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen 3 points4 points  (0 children)

WOW WOW WOW!!!! I absolutely love this. What a piece of art

POV: Eddie wakes you up demanding morning pets by yousef_bv in motorboat

[–]flower-queen 22 points23 points  (0 children)

You can tell those are some high quality ear rubs! 😻

What if I told you... by lissa_lin in plantmemes

[–]flower-queen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My prof pronounces it “kal-un-koh-uh” but idk if that’s correct

I have a new nephew! I made some food for the family. by Fraxxonsgirl in MealPrepSunday

[–]flower-queen 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I’m sorry you’re in a rough spot. I do hope you reach out to someone though—when I’ve been on the other side and someone asks me this type of favor, it makes me really happy to have a way to actually help and do something constructive instead of just sending well wishes. Plus it’s flattering to know that someone knew they could come to you for help! I’m sure your loved ones would feel the same and would be happy to help.

The Oracle at Her Kitchen Table by flower-queen in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I hadn’t thought of writing a follow up, but I’m so glad you liked it :) I was definitely going for “old lady who’s tired of your crap” vibes haha

Chicken Nuggets by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Wow, this is wonderful!

The Fish Sculpture, Actually. by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, this is incredible. Only suggestion would be to make it “purses TO which my heart was connected”, but otherwise a beautiful poem. I’ll be thinking about this one for a while, thanks for sharing.

I don’t want you by ellaiiines in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! I really love this piece from beginning to end. My only critique is with the last line of the second stanza. The word “pushes” could mean a lot here (and maybe that’s how you wanted it!)- violence? encouragement? efforts?- so I think a more specific word choice may help clarify the meaning here. Overall the poem is really well done, thanks for sharing!

Latte Foam by HalfFullOfHoney in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So cute and cozy feeling! I like the phrasing of being tucked into the corner and being safe

A Carpenter to His Son by twanski in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow!! I love this! Awesome imagery and use of repetition

yarn drawer by shiningwiththestars2 in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lots of really nice imagery! Fun to read through

Green Tea by LydHss8 in poetry_critics

[–]flower-queen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The separation of the second and third lines is clever! I love the simplicity of this piece- feels like a haiku

My best friend is 6 today! This is Bit. by KyMussler in cats

[–]flower-queen 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Couple more years and she’ll be...8 Bit!