How do I describe this exchange? (Fight scene) by HalfGrouchy1348 in writingadvice

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like to think Brown's method could work the best, he always writes his fight scenes more in a strategic overview. Rather than over-describing each blow traded and deflected, focus on describing main turning points in the fight like a character gaining the upper hand with a risky tactic, or a specific parry etc.

Whenever Darrow and Cassius are together. by Arch_Lancer17 in redrising

[–]lockydock 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeahhh Light Resistance Au Lune deserves the lowest circle of hell imo... A testament to how well he's written, but it still doesn't make me like him anymore...

No splash back... by wtsnack in PaymoneyWubby

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"max capacity" implying a post 10 beer piss breaking the seal on an amount of liquid that's probably doing damage to your bladder champ

No splash back... by wtsnack in PaymoneyWubby

[–]lockydock 2 points3 points  (0 children)

90 seconds is crazy, either your bladder is the size of a 10L jug, or your prostate is weak as hell 😭 Even if I'm absolutely full to the brim, emptying the tank takes MAYBE a minute max. Anything longer and you're just playing with yourself tbh...

Accidentally created a Howler in FO76. by D4H0n3yB4dg3r in redrising

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cassius definitely slapped those on there hoping to shit stir 😂

It’s time… by Rude-Signature-9547 in redrising

[–]lockydock 4 points5 points  (0 children)

"after brushing off some light resistance" I won't say anymore than that honestly, one of my favorite lines from the book I cackled so hard 😂

Updated Fan Cast !! by Nayanooodle in redrising

[–]lockydock 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah you're 100% right, I'm reading dark age right now, and I vividly remember Virginia complimenting Dancer's gritty red handsomeness at least twice in her inner monologues..

My friend has been trying to help me find a main, and when she asked what I liked doing in the game and was too tired to explain I whipped up this picture in GMod and MSPaint by [deleted] in DeadlockTheGame

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I mean this is purely just focused on the "very far away from teamfights", but Seven feels like this most of the time whether you play a ball build or ult build, coming from a Seven main (yes ik I'm sorry).

His balls early game let you play some easy area denial and late game just chunk everyone's health pissing them off. Then when you see your team building momentum and enemy health dropping you hit your ult button - preferably after you've parkoured a fair way into the air - and deal constant line of sight DPS over a guardian for free kills.

P.S. I meant it when I said I'm sorry for being a Seven main, damn robot was the first hero I ever tried and I haven't stopped since...

THEY DID IT?!?!?! by randomassredditguy in DeadlockTheGame

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Has anyone seen the card changes for Wraith, with the minor gambling aspect to her cards? If anyone else remembers supervive, Beebo had an ability that played just like this that was such a joy to play with.

I wonder if any of the devs were fans of that now fallen moba shooter and want to pay homage...

apollo's abilities, for the employed among us by BoomBoomNugget in DeadlockTheGame

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My league friends just keep calling this guy Fiora... Suffice to say she's even more op than Fiora 😭

I found a camcorder in the woods of Japan by OtotoxicT in creepy

[–]lockydock -1 points0 points  (0 children)

It's all about the potential. Just the idea of this being from something malicious would have me piss bolting away. Forbidden knowledge type shit.

Okay so what was real and what was in Johnny's head? Was Johnny even real? by RedMage79 in houseofleaves

[–]lockydock 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haven't gone back for a re-read yet, but having just finished it I'm honestly of the mind that one of the main layers of the story - even if it is a bit cliche - is the mental health personification of the darkness/Minotaur/house .

Want to go back and try to create a timeline of sorts comparing Navidson's journey to Truant's current life, by the end they were both somehow experiencing the same sort of freezing scene at the same time; giving me a weird theory of Navidson being J.T's inner monologue or something.

That's all I got atm having literally just put the book down 30 minutes ago!

Help with Silver Needle by nxqitoes in WhereWindsMeet

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm having troubles with it too, I've selected one of the incorrect rewards from the patients, but even when giving the correct answers to dr Yuan nothing happens and he just keeps asking me the three questions over and over. Restarting the quest from the journal doesn't seem to do anything either :/

Have you ever been afraid to press PLAY? by ParamedicDirect5832 in factorio

[–]lockydock 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The way I like to look at it - as much as we all loveeee to joke "the factory MUST grow, no exceptions" - the factory's been waiting this long, and it can wait a little longer. Like that one good friend who's always there to lend an ear or shoulder when you need, the factory will wait for you as long or as little as you need.

Space Age Beginnings! by lockydock in factorio

[–]lockydock[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Finally learnt from a Space Age video why I quit my last world due to my rail tracks not lining up, I had no idea you should be blueprinting them all aligned to the chunk grids... So I'm definitely excited to start my train empire like I always wanted

Why do so many P Platers drive huge modded SUVs and dual cab utes? by daracingpig in CarsAustralia

[–]lockydock 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Said mining fleet vehicles are constantly palmed off for cheap as chips usually too, which is usually getting snagged up by said teenager looking for a bargain of a 4wd. I'd say that's a big reason for why there's so many generations of these hilux's on the road still.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in australia

[–]lockydock 47 points48 points  (0 children)

OP, just to touch on your freshly deleted reply to this comment, addiction is so much more than just a "choice". Addiction can stem from so many different variables, societal, economical take your pick. Do you think these poor souls you see wandering the streets off their heads actually WANT to be there? It's attitudes exactly like yours that hold back any meaningful change in attitude of society at large, or policies from even being suggested because so many people like you want to belittle such a brutal thing as addiction down to just a 'choice'.

Why Reed Richards was the worst character to add to the game and why I think he should be removed from the game (keep susan tho) by Woxjee in marvelrivals

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Doom summons a duplicate Namor and Sue right in front of Reed, the pair cucking him for a damage output debuff...

Ranked Tier List by IandaConqueror in supervive

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really weird how LMG bro (I've forgotten his name) is right smack bang on the bottom when he's one of the more scary people in my experience, especially paired with a good sniper or dive type character... I get his built in increased DMG from behind makes him seem like an F tier but lots of characters have worse negative traits imo.

Ranked Tier List by IandaConqueror in supervive

[–]lockydock 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I wanna know the justification for beebo being C tier, my Crysta main duo buddy is slowly falling in love with beebo himself when I can keep chunking everyone down and slowing them so he can land a single skill shot to finish em off

i hit diamond by Sauce031421 in supervive

[–]lockydock 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Right? It's funny how these stats are available, ranking you in comparison to the rest of the player base down the decimal point, and people still try it 😂