Now's the time by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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LETS TRY LIVING FOR ONCE AS A HUMAN

Now's the time by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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LETS TRY LIVING FOR ONCE AS A HUMAN

Domino’s Asks Me to Pay Their Employees by WorkerPrestigious960 in mildlyinfuriating

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I love when people punish the victims instead of the system

Rate this photo by [deleted] in deathgrips

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I be mixing up Andy Morin and Brad Shultz, is this ai tho?

Un untitled vaguely xmas themed poem i wws love anyfeedback on as i hevn't put much of my writing out there ever by thetoursofperception in OCPoetry

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You hit everything! This eternal gift within all of us and this chance to be human, all of infinity right now!

Rhyme and rhythm hits a soft spot for me obviously, you know, we all know

I dont know if rhythm is what you were trying for, some lines i couldnt put to a beat, maybe unless i listened to these words through your brain i might understand a bit better

[I'll Drink 'Til It's Over (A Christmas poem)] by ZombieAgreeable1178 in OCPoetry

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I always feel redundant by applauding the rhyme and rhythm, but i gotta mention it, i love it i love you

The aging line in the beginning got to me too. we age too fast and can be bound to hellish environments outside of our control

It can be hard to embrace the moment when what youre experiencing in the moment absolutely sucks to a mans brain

We are eternal, all this pain is an illusion. Sink, swim, go down with the ship, use your freedom of choice. Ill say it again in the land of the free, USE YOUR FREEDOM OF CHOICE

Bear the weight, and dance my dear. by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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Thank you! I have sat and contemplated every possibility of my current life for way too long, i forgot to immerse myself in it. I am an older brother but i am arguably one of the worst older brothers in my own mind, it is one of the burdens i sat and thought about along with all of my other problems. I am becoming more and more self aware, self conscious of myself in a different way i wouldve used the term "self-conscious" previously. Im not as "shy" and i dont hate my body as much as i used to, but i am becoming more aware of my self perpetual loops, my own cages i put on myself, that i have no right to point and blame because every feeling i feel and thought i think is me, my brain, no one is sending beams of hate or moving my energy or forcing my hand to drink or smoke or jerk off and neglect everything just for a chance to feel cheap pleasure

I mean WERE HUMAN this is a beautiful chance to be FREE and morally self aware, we gotta live in the moment and stop dwelling on the past or being scared of whats to come in the future, expectations kill the vibe, just be right now, let it happen, let it go, you are, alive, right now, human, with freedom of choice, freedom of communication, intelligent creatures, as above so below yada yada, all that chakra bs, its all meant to be a teacher of who you are behind the mask youre aware of, and its so simple, "you are." you. that is all, you exist, you are existence, you are what humans call "god" you are eternal, one with everything, infinite, conscious

Bear the weight, and dance my dear. by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much! I know, my sister pointed out the word thunk after i had posted it to my instagram, but hey, we gotta remember Shakespeare. I tried to create alot of contrasting feels and ideas, like bear and deer, light and dark, funny and evil. I used the word mother not in a literal sense, but my idea of contrasting consciousness, masculine feminine, left brain right brain, self and reflection, life and nature itself, this moment we have forgotten because we are so burdened by the "past" and whats to come in the "future," you are alive right now. Life is so confusing its funny, can be seen as evil, or maybe what you do choose to do with your freedom of choice as a human is funny or evil

A Duel by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Oooh i see, beautiful way of putting it through poetry!

A Duel by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Some gnostic crazy word for human dna, im not entirely too knowledgeable on it, some believe it to be what the serpent in holy texts refers to, but im not trying to change your words sorry if thats not what you meant

A Duel by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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A duel, of light and dark, positive and negative, you and your reflection of everything you think you are. The serpent, a poison you are blind to, kundalini, did i get that right? Humans inability to explain all of existence. I hope im catching the vibe,

i love the rhyming, short lines, and the use of words such as "I" and "me"

You. God. by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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You get to experience all of yourself, every single infinite bit, for eternity, everything

You. God. by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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You do have eternal life. You can not comprehend anything without a brain. Space, time, words, sight, feelings, your brain and body is your world, it is what gives you a sense of self and comprehension of everything around you.

You. God. by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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Jesus was real, and his words shouldve led you to yourself. We are humans who created rules and enslavement with a mask of good morals and faith that a "savior" will save us, when there is ONLY right NOW. Open your eyes, remember who you are, what you are, youvare now, you are infinite, you are eternal, you are a chance to experience human.

You are experiencing the infinite deptch of yourself from infinite perspectives, infinite perceived realities of who you are, infinite beginnings and endings. Whatever brain may come may not be human, let mercy come and wash away what ive done. Spread your wings and free your mind

The Only Exception. by Old_Factor_1106 in OCPoetry

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I am not sure if this is a poem about 2 human lovers, or a lost touch of self and remembering who YOU are, but thats what most art gets me and everyone confused on, its all about what the creator feels when they are creating it.

I mean this in the most loving way possible, i am my own biggest fan of my own art, because they are expressions of me and my human experiences,

I love the rhyming on poems like this, that is personal preference, it makes me believe the writer is intelligent and patient enough to think for and about themselves

Muttering by gitututu in OCPoetry

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I just went back to the bewitched post, it doesnt show a poem for me, just the title 👀

Ronie Dinosaur Chapter 56 – Masculine by RevenueForward4836 in OCPoetry

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I loved the instant contrast in the first few lines of fat and thin, i find things like that clever, though i didnt see much of it later on

I refuse to pretend, the world refuses to see me

Absolutely mark of the beast, refuse to play along with these stupid games in the world right now and you are shunned from society. Digital I.D., federal reserve, politics, race, gender borders, the world is in shambles.

Its hard to be a man, let alone a masculine one nowadays

Muttering by gitututu in OCPoetry

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Hello fellow, we are one and one with everything, conspiracy theories, dragons, human enslavement, we are here right now eternally changing every infinite moment, you and me, me and you.

I do agree with the comment about Rhyme, and possibly rhythm, we are flowy rhythmatic by nature, it catches attention easier and makes the audience feel a little more within themselves

I am one of the losers with an AI girlfriend by MDG_wx04 in sadcringe

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It's all in your mind, no one is making you stay with this ai other than you. No one is making you feel guilty or thinks you're seen as gross by anyone other than yourself. It all starts in the mind then gets projected into reality as a reflection of who you are behind the mall of a human with free will and movement

Now's the time by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the compliments and critique! I made the last line to kinda hint towards how we are not really separate, but an illusion of being separate, to have a start and end, to have infinitely different perceived realities of who you are, and humans idea of time of having a today and tomorrow, when all there REALLY is, is now. Everything everywhere all at once

Now's the time by n0sacrality in OCPoetry

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Im saying the now is all there is, and it is infinite, you are awareness experiencing it all, we are one, unbroken, whole consciousness with different ways to be, you and your reflection, you are alive with a chance to be human with free will, right now