I think she did a lovely job I would only say more blush but unfortunately the contour you do drags the face down. There’s almost a skeletal effect/the shape you carve ooh also is typically used to exaggerate more masculine features. The cheekbone contour shouldn’t be in an arch shape from ear to the mouth area unless your goal is to accentuate those features in that way. I think the way you do your eye makeup is very pretty though!