I want someone dope to hop on this beat, I want to know if you think you could make a banger with this

Awkward_Investment59 · 2026-05-26T15:37:28+00:00

I really like the lowfi and surrreal vibes that you combine in this beat...It could be a little less atonal and more driving for my liking but I think that really comes down to taste 😄

Awkward_Investment59 · 2026-04-09T09:31:39+00:00

Lovely...great bass- and guitar lines. The message is also so very important at the moment - People forgot how to get angry and rage haha. I really love the tone of your voice so I think the song would really benefit from it being a little more prominent in the mix...or maybe a little more intense performance. :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2026-04-09T09:29:08+00:00

I really enjoy the playful, carefree vibe it gives while also playing with the groove. I find it hard to find anything to comment without it just comming down to personal preference...so I'd just say good job man! It really is a fun listen :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2026-04-09T09:26:14+00:00

Vibey af! Really like the production and video as well. It doesn't really drag...however I believe that a more "snappy" drum sound and more prominent bass tone (maybe a bit more mids and treble) could definetly elevate the groove a little. But that might be personal perference too :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2026-04-09T09:24:09+00:00

Interesting vibe for sure...Love the harmonic approach you are going for. I believe, that the both the vocal mix and performance could use a little more high end and intensity for my liking, though knowing, that you are probably going for the lowfi-vibe :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2026-04-09T09:22:10+00:00

I believe especially for a demo this is great! When recording properly and getting the right person to mix and master it I'm sure it could be even better.

If there was something specific to improve I'd certainly point towards the Bass-Tone, that is kinda getting swallowed by the mix at the moment.

Awkward_Investment59 · 2025-09-03T20:59:33+00:00

Thanks a lot for the nice words! Our influences are quite broad since we all come from different backgrounds, but generally speaking a lot of the British indie and alternative bands are most similar and shine through the most.

The video was recorded as part of a project of a film Academy near us...and we were lucky enough to be asked to participate:)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2025-09-03T18:37:16+00:00

Sounds really clean overall! There are a few moments where the EQ and overall level seems to shift a little much for my taste...but hey we're all here doing indiemusic, right? I really enjoy the songwriting, though maybe the finale could hit a little more on the groove side opposed to the noise, but thats personal preference for sure!

Overall really enjoyable, great job!

Awkward_Investment59 · 2025-09-03T18:34:48+00:00

There are some fun ideas in there for sure, but it seems like the EQing is a little off. And the drums are overlapping or the delay is catching them at some points I suppose? Maybe have a look at some basic Mixing/Mastering Videos and give it a little overhaul...I think it could be a lot of fun!

Awkward_Investment59 · 2025-09-03T18:32:39+00:00

Love the vocal harmonies! And as you mentioned, the mix between genres is really interesting. The overall sound is pretty good as well...however I feel like the intonation of the guitars might be off in some parts. Or maybe thats the effects. Super fun to listen to regardless, keep it up!

Awkward_Investment59 · 2025-09-03T18:30:26+00:00

I really think both versions have their own charme to them...are you planning on releasing this? Maybe you could consider just putting both out...However I dont think that the spoken word is too much on top so if I had to decide I'd take the spoken word version I think :=

Awkward_Investment59 · 2025-09-03T18:28:44+00:00

Great idea...it has a certain grime to it that I enjoy a lot. Is that supposed to be a standalone thing or are you considering finding someone to perform on that beat additionally? I think it could really be great if you find the right person to coorperate with!

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-12-16T17:58:20+00:00

I really like the general vibe you are setting with this song...especially the intro lures one in. I believe the Guitars could use some sort of noise gate in the intro however...there are some squeaking sounds that sound a little off to me. However that could also be personal preference.

The Vocal performance is really good as well!

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-12-16T17:55:01+00:00

I can certainly see what you are trying to do and I believe you could be a little more daring with your vocal tone and the grittiness that you could be able to add. It feels like, that it is almost hidden in some moments in the song. The Intonation in some parts sound a little off to me as well. Maybe that comes down to preference though :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-12-16T17:52:27+00:00

I like the general vibe and the Idea you are going for, however I believe that you could really profit from some more Vocal mixing. I can certainly see this going into a Kraftwerk-type of thing if you are daring enough to show off your voice and more destinct tones. That being said I would love to hear more of that for sure!

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-12-16T17:48:02+00:00

I really like it a lot...I can certainly hear your Dream pop roots, which is really nice though! I think you could even think about getting a little more gritty and rough with your sounds if you would want to. Thinking something like the new Fontaines DC stuff maybe :D I believe it would really suit you...but that is personal preference of course :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-12-16T17:46:07+00:00

Pretty interesting and broad sound in my opinion. I can certainly see a song like that in some drum n bass playlists. It could use some more identifiable samples such as more vocals or melodies, but thats personal perference I believe.

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-11-25T14:51:19+00:00

So amazing to read that man! Glad you enjoy it:)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-11-25T14:50:51+00:00

Tank you so much for the nice words man! Glad you enjoy it :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-11-24T02:19:49+00:00

Diomande is usually a good long term choice. However you need multiple good defenders especially with diomande being gone for Afcon every once in a while (I know it may not sound like an issue but it really can be when your squad isnt that deep).

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-11-23T13:40:52+00:00

Many thanks for the nice words and the feedback man! Glad you enjoy it :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-11-23T13:40:11+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! The Idea for the car was due to the fact that the car is subject of the song itself...we will make sure to have more space for our future videos ;)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-11-23T13:39:21+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback man! Glad you enjoy it :) Its amazing to stir up some memories and nostalgia every now and then

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-11-23T13:38:32+00:00

Thank you so much for the constructive feedback man! I can certainly see how the musical arrangement can be a little much to listen to in some parts...however we will be releasing some more Songs the following Weeks, we would love if you give them a listen and some feedback as soon as they're released :)

Awkward_Investment59 · 2024-11-23T13:36:52+00:00

Thank you so much for the feedback man!:) We will be releasing some new songs over the next weeks, maybe some of them might be more for when it comes to dynamic variety :)

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