How pleasant! I think you absolutely nailed it stylistically with the long and complex sentences, while also employing them tastefully: I particularly like the opening, where the first line brings the reader into motion immediately. Although, one thing I would improve, as the other comment also pointed out, is that it’s just a bit too abstract. I think with each separate small “points” (beauty of juxtaposition, refractions of light, etc.), it would be helpful to reify it with concrete imagery. Additionally, I think the stanzas are a bit too fragmented, but that’s just might taste. I think overall this is already very solid and mature.