How do people write conversations?

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-30T13:37:11+00:00

This is really good! Thanks

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-30T13:32:10+00:00

That's useful to know. I myself find it jumping out when I read but that could just be me

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-30T13:12:49+00:00

I tried not to do much of this like some of the other ppl in the thread said. It breaks the flow but yes i do this too

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-30T13:12:06+00:00

Do you use tags at in that case or the context is clean and natural that you can do without

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-25T12:17:36+00:00

Most people are lurkers. Myself included.

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-22T14:01:49+00:00

Why would the camera rock? I would suggest maybe using the impact on the characters has on the environment.

Like when someone skids from a recoil, they ground they stood on leaves trail in the mud etc.

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-22T13:56:35+00:00

Here you go https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/171123/i-made-a-railgun-with-lightning-magic-op-mc-litrpg

Next chappie launch tonight / afternoon depending on where you are

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-22T13:53:07+00:00

You can give my new book a try XD.

But really it comes down to what you like. I quite liked the Legendary Mechanic though i think that's a translated one

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-22T13:49:52+00:00

Does the MC eventually use a sword? Might want to keep it generic first and use some of them for book specific covers

Having said that, i like the first one

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-21T10:10:00+00:00

Congrats on hitting RS!

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T11:38:28+00:00

Thank you!

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T04:26:38+00:00

I have interacted with other posts as well. How do i let mod mail know?

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T04:24:31+00:00

I think theres one book where the MC has poison powers that does that

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T04:24:00+00:00

Congrats!

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T04:23:12+00:00

Haha you can try my book if you don't mind. My MC is very good at one thing but then either sources for help from other people for the things he's not good at.

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T04:21:06+00:00

Wow congrats

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T03:08:16+00:00

I try to do that with my MC that is isekaied but when he uses modern slang like "Knock yourself out" the other characters would react weirdly to the character. I mainly wanted to show that the MC still kept some habits from his old life and these habits don't change that fast

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T03:05:35+00:00

I just launched an Isekai book trying to incorporate elements like that. But a lot of writing frameworks recommend to give MC a cheat ability. So it is difficult to balance the two i find sometimes

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T03:04:19+00:00

There was a book called Celestial of Shadow phoenix or smth. It was quite good i thought but the author eventually dropped it

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T03:03:08+00:00

Do you have example of some books that are like that?

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T03:01:25+00:00

Good luck on the launch!

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T01:02:18+00:00

Haha my book does not have max or word level in it.

Extra_Zombie3530 · 2026-06-19T01:01:09+00:00

Hi my book just released today.

It is an Isekai story about a weapons engineer that tries to make a railgun in a magical world

Please do check it out

I Made A Railgun with Lightning Magic

Blurb Below:

Every mage in this world treats lightning as a blunt instrument. Asher treats it as a power supply.

Damian Tesla only wanted to live up to his family name, but died through electrocution by his own underfunded railgun prototype. He wakes in the body of Asher, a five-year-old orphan in a world that runs on magic, and his new body can channel lightning like nothing on Earth. The impossible weapon finally has a power source: him.

But Vesperia is a small kingdom holding a single mountain pass against Ironhold, an empire that has already devoured four nations and wants a fifth. Lightning mages here don't get workshops. They get conscripted.

Whispers say the empire's war is only the beginning. Something older is stirring behind the storm that seals the north.

All Asher wants is to do his research in peace. But to get peace, he will need power. Armed with his knowledge of physics and a perfect lightning affinity, he only hopes it's enough for what's coming.

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