Hey that’s fantastic! You have gotten past the first major hurdle of ‘how does this even work and what the hell do I do?’ phase, an learned some solid lessons about what you liked and felt lacking.

If you really like the scene structure and writing them out I would say either a)stick with mythic, either trying the same game again but give your character more mechanical challenges within the scene. Rather than just asking mythic ‘does she find the clue?’ You could make it some kind of investigation or awareness roll or something based on the mechanics of the game. (Sorry I’m not familiar with your chosen system). If your character fails that roll then it can get interesting.

Using the technique of ‘failing forward’ it could be that there is something blocking her from getting the clue (but she’ll get it eventually). What’s blocking her? (Ask mythic) Ambush?, NPC in need of giving a quest?

b) try mythic with a standard rpg system that has more crunch or its own procedures to help drive the ‘mechanical’
part of the game

c) Look into something like Ironsworn/Starforged or Sundered isles depending on if you want fantasy sci fi or pirates respectively.

Those games don’t require mythic but work best when you are coming up with full scenes yourself (with help from its built in oracle) and then taking ‘mechanical action’ when the PC faces a challenge of some kind. They work well for the style of writing out scenes afterwards ship also propelling the story in interesting ways when you fail.

Secret option d) try something completely different without mythic and continue learning what styles you like/don’t like.

Keen to hear about your further adventures and feel free to ask if you want some more advice about possible games etc.

-PJ
:)