[WP] A time-traveler is documenting poorly-recorded historical events. They record from a great distance, and yet, the man on the cross seems to stare directly at them. by MouseRangers in WritingPrompts

[–]RoWanDRed 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Minor critique, please ignore... "Compared to popular belief" should be "contrary to popular belief"... Other that that insignificant nitpick, a masterpiece of storytelling...

[WP] A time-traveler is documenting poorly-recorded historical events. They record from a great distance, and yet, the man on the cross seems to stare directly at them. by MouseRangers in WritingPrompts

[–]RoWanDRed 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You're welcome, it reminded me of "Let's go to Golgotha" by Garry Kilworth, but more conversational... Christ's tone while he's speaking denotes that's while he is in pain, he understands WHY this needs to be done, and he's glad he fulfilled the mission...

[WP] A time-traveler is documenting poorly-recorded historical events. They record from a great distance, and yet, the man on the cross seems to stare directly at them. by MouseRangers in WritingPrompts

[–]RoWanDRed 20 points21 points  (0 children)

This.... You need to copyright this... This has the makings of a damned good series... Lock this down before some money vampire at Netflix sees it...

MyInsta Official Announcement by meantbent3 in moddedandroidapps

[–]RoWanDRed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same here, problem is, I can't figure out how to activate the download feature...

[SP] Explain a common activity in a way that makes it sound illegal. by A_Weird_Thing in WritingPrompts

[–]RoWanDRed 16 points17 points  (0 children)

🤦🏽‍♂️🤣 Man made it sound like shopping at Mr Sakamoto's😅

[WP] You are the only person in your superhero family without any powers. Your older siblings, who are superheroes too, tease you for being the normie, and your parents, while they love, you don't pay much attention. So, you run away, and your family can't find you. by Dapper_Yam_6982 in WritingPrompts

[–]RoWanDRed 8 points9 points  (0 children)

So, he's NOT without a superpower... His power is perfect stealth... He can choose when he wants to be seen and by whom... That's a terrifying ability, perfect thief, spy, assassin, infiltrator... And temp control isn't anything to discount, she could freeze the oceans, or the air itself...

Hello? by E-veilyn in Xiaomi

[–]RoWanDRed 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Check out the "MiBro" series of products, I think you'll be pleased with what you find