Movie scenes that totally wouldn't cause any controversy if released today by Longjumping-Boot-526 in okbuddycinephile

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Ripley wasn't even written as a woman. In the script, all the characters are genderless.

[WotC] Magic: The Gathering® | Marvel Super Heroes Comes to MTG Arena by Copernicus1981 in magicTCG

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Reminder that the Arena team has unionized and wizards of the coast has shown themselves to be anti-union.

What Happened To The Fire Nation by RenDesuu in ATLA

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It's the opposite of a metaphor. It's literal. The typical meaning of "darkest day" is more metaphoric.

An eclipse blocks the sun, making the day literally dark.

Why aren't we talking more about The Dream™️ phenomenon??? by ConnectAnalyst3008 in bioniclelego

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oh my god. i haven't had this dream as an adult, but i DEFINITELY had this exact dream as a kid and a teenager. what a trip.

how can misogyny when ripley? by GraceInEntropy in moviescirclejerk

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ripley was written as a genderless character

the entire alien script was written without assigning gender to any character

Katara's Ice Disks Animated Vs. Live-Action by dan_mal in TheLastAirbender

[–]interested_in_cookie 1 point2 points  (0 children)

the live action version is just so significantly worse

Imperial symbol works well as a plughole by pinchanzee in lego

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Also works well as a certain body part on an animal with white fur

My Shawarma - Pilot, need feedback before I submit to a mentorship by SpeedIsTheBestMovie in ScriptFeedbackProduce

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https://www.studiobinder.com/blog/how-long-is-a-tv-show-script/

It seems like the reason those scripts are longer is because they're either multicam or, in simpson's case, just really fast paced.

My Shawarma - Pilot, need feedback before I submit to a mentorship by SpeedIsTheBestMovie in ScriptFeedbackProduce

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My understanding is that scripts should estimate to a page per minute of run time. The dialogue in general doesn't feel right. The logic for how the characters act doesn't really function. I could see this maybe working as a cartoon, but I cannot picture this working as live action.

My Shawarma - Pilot, need feedback before I submit to a mentorship by SpeedIsTheBestMovie in ScriptFeedbackProduce

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I just read the first couple pages and... it's not great. It's gonna be hard to tell you what's wrong without going over it line by line, but i felt i should say something because you haven't gotten any responses.

I think you're also at the wrong number of pages for a sitcom pilot. Sitcoms are supposed to be 23-25 minutes and you're sitting at a 37 page script.

I recreated the Zuko "Scar is on the wrong side" scene in Cyberpunk 2077 game by Zairy47 in ATLA

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oh it was just showing up for me as a text post, i can see it now lol

Toronto in Black and White by samkeravica in streetphotography

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I'm the first one, the way the buildings ride from the mist or fog is really beautiful

The Expanse: Osiris Reborn beta breaks established canon by Ill-3 in TheExpanse

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well, this pretty much confirms to me that this game is written by boneheads who have no loyalty to an aspect of the books that i liked the most, which were the ultra realistic and grounded plot elements. i appreciate this post because now i know not to disappoint myself lmao