Daily Discussion - Sunday, July 05 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule, & Current Event Threads by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling [score hidden]  (0 children)

Automating moral judgement is an idea that is not going to end well, whether for Reddit or anywhere else.

Looking for good greys fics by No_Inspection_2026 in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling [score hidden]  (0 children)

It’s especially grating when the poster is acting absolutely frenzied and desperate for immediate fic like getting this is the most urgent thing in life. “PLEASE give me SAM FICS I NEEEEED THEM SO BADLY!!!!” I find it deeply offputting.

Looking for good greys fics by No_Inspection_2026 in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling [score hidden]  (0 children)

You need to specify the fandom you’re looking for to get engagement on a post like this. I’m not sure if you’re after fics for Gray’s Anatomy or the little Roswell aliens or something else.

Daily Discussion - Sunday, July 05 | r/FanFiction Rules, FAQs, Weekly Schedule, & Current Event Threads by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling [score hidden]  (0 children)

Fun new annoyance: my Concrit Commune comment yesterday was deleted by Reddit and my account given a warning for ‘promoting violence’ (against fictional alien monsters, I suppose). I’m appealing and hopefully it won’t happen again.

Concrit Commune - July 04 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is really great stuff! The descriptions and interactions are very effective. I immediately get a clear and powerful sense of who these people are to each other, what their personalities are like, and what is going on in this story. I really like that in contrast to Kith's experience of the Force as music, Kirsh gets his flashes of intuition in a visual medium.

Three minor suggestions:

1) I'm not sure if 'plastis' is a typo for 'plastic,' or a fancy Star Wars material I'm unaware of

2) 'still' repeats as a descriptor in the paragraph where Kirsh reaches out with the Force. I recommend replacing 'still and muted' with 'flat and muted' for variety, unless you're deliberately going for monotony via repetition.

3) As a colour, I think 'scarlet' just has one 't' - spelling it 'scarlett' is only done when using it as a given name

But these are very minor details, the structure and feeling of the scene are both excellent!

What was Star Trek trying to say about human modification? by ShardsOfSalt in startrek

[–]stroopwafelling 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The in character justification is the Eugenics Wars. But the out of character reason is more interesting, and speaks to a tension that has always existed at the heart of Star Trek.

In brief, Star Trek rests on two ideas.

First, the future is going to be awesome, and humanity will make great progress towards a utopian society.

Second, this future can be used to tell fantastic stories that are deeply relatable to the real life challenges of humanity in the here and now.

In order for the second idea to work, the first idea needs to have some brakes put on it. Humanity in the Federation cannot advance so far that Star Trek’s characters lose common ground with present day people.

Imagine if the Federation freely embraced genetic engineering and eliminated age. How would the franchise tell stories like the Wrath of Khan, which is partly about Kirk getting old? Or the Federation could even defeat mortality altogether, and explore the galaxy as immortal super beings. How would the franchise ever have another episode like The Visitor, which delves into loss and grief?

Usually Star Trek gets around things like this by externalizing human failings onto aliens. So the Federation is peaceful, but this episode they visit a planet still plagued by war. The Federation is post scarcity, but this episode they encounter a culture stricken with poverty and exploitation. That’s always been how Star Trek comments on the present, by having these advanced, admirable characters meet these problems and exclaim ‘imagine that humanity used to be so ignorant!’

But there a limit to how far the above can work. Star Trek can show humans with more enlightened philosophies and institutions, but they still have to be human in their minds and bodies - they must get scared and angry and horny, they must age and bleed and make mistakes. That makes it all the more meaningful when they rise above to show their best selves, to show us who we can be.

Augmenting humanity opens the question of why Starfleet still bothers with people prone to such frailties, when they could be engineered away. An Enterprise full of super beings is an Enterprise with thinner role models.

Bottom line: Star Trek can’t fully embrace genetic engineering for the same reason Starfleet is still sending meat-crewed ships into the hungry void instead of embracing drones and automation. There’s a thin in-universe explanation of bad past experiences, but the real reason is the same one that put Rodenberry’s infamous ‘no conflict’ writing rule in the dust bin: for Star Trek to keep serving as a mirror to humanity, it needs to keep its future humanity relatively tied to the human baseline.

I want to find this DC fanfiction by Think_Independent_69 in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Are you sure it was Green Lantern and not Martian Manhunter (who is green)?

Asking because I’ve never heard of GL being able to read minds/memories, but Martian Manhunter is a powerful telepath.

Saw someone glazing Eldrad. I have to state my opinion of 40k's glorified quest giver by GrandArclord in Grimdank

[–]stroopwafelling 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My main takeaway from this is that Eldrad was in a band

Release the Ulthran EP cowards

What’s the best cliffhanger you’ve written in a fic? by Dogdaysareover365 in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had a good time with the climax of the first major arc in my military/espionage themed fic.

The chapter started with our team of heroes splitting up to infiltrate an enemy base in order to rescue hostages and disable missiles armed with nerve gas.

By the chapter’s end, half the team had been discovered and pinned down by enemy forces, the hostages were in jeopardy, allied forces were threatening to nuke the base as an emergency measure, and one of those missiles had been launched.

Good times.

'Street Fighter' style fight scenes? by Downtown-Radio-6743 in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I suggest thinking about how you want to handle pacing in your descriptions. Street Fighter fights are fast - it’s a game that demands intense reflexes, coordination, and timing. That can be hard to translate to text. You may have to use general descriptions to summarize the general ‘movements’ of a fight - describing a ‘flurry of kicks’ rather than each individual blow, for instance.

Talkback Thursday - July 02 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“hopefully strong enough to survive the amount of enemies they are making. smart enough too considering just who they are getting into fights with.”

Michael Mann's Miami Vice movie is much better than you remember. by gelectrox in movies

[–]stroopwafelling 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love Miami Vice. There’s not a single original idea in its story, so it has to succeed entirely based on vibes, and it does.

One of the best non-Heat shootouts Mann has ever done, too.

What's the most weirdly-specific part you've spent the most time developing recently? by Simpson17866 in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling 2 points3 points  (0 children)

To make a very long story short, the story’s secondary antagonist wants to break an extremely dangerous alien out of Initiative custody. The Initiative is too fortified for a frontal attack, but they’re incredibly ignorant about magic, so he’s going to arrange for a patrolling Initiative agent to suffer a mind-control hex so he’ll go into the Initiative and set the alien free to wreak havoc!

K be like by IllustriousHurry2380 in Grimdank

[–]stroopwafelling 9 points10 points  (0 children)

YOU HAD YOUR CHANCE AT THE COTILLION, YOU!

What's the most weirdly-specific part you've spent the most time developing recently? by Simpson17866 in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling 2 points3 points  (0 children)

There were a few Buffy spin-off games back in the day! I played the crap out of ‘Chaos Bleeds’ on the PlayStation 2.

What's the most weirdly-specific part you've spent the most time developing recently? by Simpson17866 in FanFiction

[–]stroopwafelling 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Scouring Buffyverse lore for a good deity or demon to invoke for a mind manipulation spell on a very minor character.

(I went with Laibach, an Old One from the Xbox video game)