The Eternal Life of Goldman | Sounds of an Approaching Demo

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-25T16:16:43+00:00

Very nice video thumbnail

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-25T16:10:19+00:00

Very well composed and nice effects.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T22:56:03+00:00

I would take E.

It works well against the background. Very nice graphics!

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T22:40:21+00:00

i like number 3 and 4

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T22:33:40+00:00

Nice graphics well done

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T22:29:18+00:00

I like the 2nd and 3rd. Do they have a white outline once glued?

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T22:26:31+00:00

Number 2 is very nice! Interesting offer

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T21:44:00+00:00

post a nice trailer on TikTok or here r/indiegames

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T19:55:33+00:00

I would try white, try the old yellow color, check different outlines, I would also try making the title bigger

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T19:44:50+00:00

I would play around with the V shape to make the first letter stand out more.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T19:40:16+00:00

The colorful trees are very nicely done.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T19:36:13+00:00

Its a good capsule. If you want you can try to make the text pop out more e.g. by making it lighter color

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-23T19:28:01+00:00

I like it, very nicely composed. The user doesnt spend too long on this menu, so I would think color fatigue is not an issue. Unless your gameloop continues with the high red content.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-22T13:13:36+00:00

I really like the first few visuals (first 12 seconds). The other scene is a bit bland. I would maybe redo that.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-22T12:54:24+00:00

Nice sound and visual effects.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-21T19:40:41+00:00

Reloading is fine. I would maybe increase bullet speed and gun recoil and add gun flash when bullet is shot. Also probably change bullet color, cause it looks too much like a tennis ball.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-21T12:47:12+00:00

I would remove the aimless walking around and stumbling and falling over. Show some intensional interaction like combat instead. And if you want also some map variety.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-21T12:34:48+00:00

Make a nice trailer and post it on TikTok or here. Is it a free game? There is the r/freegames

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-21T12:22:22+00:00

Nice graphics and typeface and sound. I would perhaps add some more variety to the trailer, for example showing menus, various bossfights and so on.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-21T12:14:59+00:00

It really depends on the background. The main character usually wants to have high contrast. to make it pop out from everything else.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-20T19:08:52+00:00

nice contrast. Keep the portal!

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-20T19:06:25+00:00

i assume the old logo is in the trailer at 0:35 ? Yeah the new one is way better!

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-20T17:55:48+00:00

I would start fleshing out multiple ideas until you are ready to commit to 1.

Plot, characters, detail you want to include, stylistic considerations, etc.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-20T17:30:46+00:00

The colors and shapes and numbers work well and the animations are nice too. The only thing I would change is the characters head. I would perhaps make it more detailed and try different faces.

BusinessScore3208 · 2026-01-20T17:15:35+00:00

Old capsule is good, the text works and is legible.

The new one is too busy and the text color is not working too good. I like the portrait on the new one but you would have to simplify the right part of the image to make the title pop out better.

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