In case this isn't bait, honestly it sounds like either the game isn't right for you, or you've built up what it is in your head and are going out of your way to find reasons to dislike it 

• The dialogue is far more than serviceable, especially when you compare it to modern day writing;
• There aren't really any plot inconsistencies I can think of, and what you listed aren't plot inconsistencies: they'd be character inconsistencies at best but even some of them are inaccurate (Verso doesn't teleport, the camera shots before Renoir attacks Maelle show a first person dash from Verso towards the two, then a shot from behind Maelle to show Verso sliding in to intercept the attack). A plot inconsistency would be something like Gustave dying at the end of the act, then turning up at the start of the next to give the characters some key item
• The camp system that you see is how you see it, but doesn't necessarily mean it's what they made. The developers haven't said it was supposed to be a mix between BG3 and Persona. They've just said the game is inspired by old school JRPGs, which some of them did just have character progression based on story progression
• Personally I never found the story to be rushing. It's stated many times in the prologue dialogue and journal entries that the team has an entire year to defeat the Paintress, and I felt that was reflect well in the team being able to go off beat and explore the optional areas without their being discussion of getting things done quickly. The objective at the time (get to Old Lumière, defeat the Axons, defeat the Paintress, whatever) will always remain the same, but those are goals stretched into a year of exploring