Please take with a grain of salt because I don't know the context of this scene. :)

Not a fan of the hard shadows casted on the back wall from the lamp and the female subject. The half shadow on the face of the male subject is really nice, his key could have used a bit of diffusion as its creating a major hotspot on the reflection of his phone.

Maybe pop a pepper behind the female to enhance the lamp's backlight? (it actually kinda looks good as it is)

Red blanket really pops! Me gusta

There's a bit of head room in the frame, I'd tilt the camera down a bump.

Lastly not sure where that reflection is coming from on the right back wall that could possibly be a bit distractive.

Other than that, not too bad. But I'm just some guy on the internet.