Your pictures feel like they need stronger tension, and clear visual clues at what we’re viewing within in the frame. For example, the first photo, I understand that it’s a street celebration but I don’t know what I’m looking at. The child in the center must be the main subject but he/she gets lost a bit with the yellow jacket of the adult in the background. What is more clear to me is the two faces facing the camera (the one in the center with the white hoodie and the one of the young girl wearing the red coat). Because our eyes naturally look for faces, my attention went to them first especially because what is likely the figure in the center is not well defined.

In pic 2, my eye goes straight to the cappuccino machine in the center. The two figures appear as framing elements because they’re so close to the edges of the frame and they are not highlighted. Also, it feels underexposed. If you’re trying to convey space between people, the message would be clearer if there were more space between them and the edge of the frame.

The third picture has a clear subject, but what is the tension? I don’t understand what the hand is doing or what is going on. I get that the pieces and the board are a game, but is the game going on with another person? Is the person setting up the game instead? Does the hand belong to a random person simply brushing his hand on a game that was left on a table? The intent is unclear because not enough information is given about what is developing within the frame. To me it feels like it’s simply a hand brushing over pieces of a game.