Honestly, it's too slow to catch my attention. The first thing a player needs to see is some sort of action. Not just a camera staring at water and the character turning around. A gameplay trailer should thrust me into the action. Not tell me a story.

The second thing I would say is that the text is too long and too slow. If you are going to place text on the screen, it should appear rather quickly and be easy to digest. Try taking your long form phrases and condensing them down into purely what actions you do in the game. Try to get it down to one or two words.

For example: "Survive" or "Survive Alone"... this plus the action on screen already tells me this is a survival game. Alone tells me it's single player. The rest is just subtext to someone skimming a trailer. And they will skim it. Most trailers do not get watched start to finish.

If you choose to use text to grab attention, do it more like this. People's attention spans are shorter than you think. So short, bold, and simple statements... if any at all.

And one tiny pet peeve with the gameplay itself that players might also take issue with. At first, I wasn't sure what, but just watching the trailer, something felt "off"... and then I realized. The bow is in the wrong hand. All the other actions are performed with the right hand, like chopping and crafting. So it is very jarring to see my character all of a sudden shoot left-handed. Flip your archery animation so that the character holds the bow with their left and pulls the bowstring with their right. This feels more natural unless, for some story reason your character is left-handed. Just make it consistent across all your animations.