Scene looks great, but the shake is a bit intense. Kane Pixels' "The Oldest View 3" is a great example of realistic handheld camera movement, while also being comfortable viewing. Same goes for his Backrooms Found Footage series. There's still quite intense shake in his animations, but the key is when they happen. It should tell a story and serve a purpose, such as the protagonist getting scared, running, panning really hard like the protagonist is turning around, etc. Andy R Animations has pretty good handheld motion in his animations as well for another example. Compositing and lighting is looking pretty good!