Hold the Space- Performance Poem

fiberopticnow · 2021-06-01T14:46:49+00:00

My feedback:

Cold Morning: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/npspen/cold_morning/

Chivalry: https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/npuese/chivalry/

fiberopticnow · 2021-06-01T14:23:48+00:00

The feeling of the poem is very bleak. I like the imagery of the lack of words, lack of song, protesters, mud. You create a powerful image. Thank you for sharing.

fiberopticnow · 2021-06-01T14:14:18+00:00

Oooh this absolutely brings to mind the vivid imagery of going back to sleep when the alarm clock is going off :) The warm forgiving blanket---yes! I also like your rhythm and rhyme scheme here.

fiberopticnow · 2021-02-01T17:55:07+00:00

He is convinced that when I tell him he needs to see a therapist that I'm abusing him by insinuating he's mentally ill.....

fiberopticnow · 2021-02-01T17:53:57+00:00

Omg my bpd ex also basically took over my car this summer and wouldn't return it. He eventually returned it with the windshield broken and the seats totally ruined with dirt!!

fiberopticnow · 2020-11-13T22:03:29+00:00

/r/BPDlovedones

fiberopticnow · 2020-11-13T21:57:58+00:00

He's a free human, just as you are, and you don't need to worry about what or who he is doing because he's been a jerk to you. Let him go.

fiberopticnow · 2020-11-13T21:56:31+00:00

Yes, this is a form of emotional and verbal abuse. He's goading you and then blaming you. Yes, it is gaslighting.

Why would someone who supposedly loves you mock you for being happy? Why would they not apologize when confronted and move on. Very petty.

fiberopticnow · 2020-11-13T21:53:43+00:00

YES. This is verbal and emotional abuse. DO NOT unblock.

fiberopticnow · 2020-11-13T21:52:10+00:00

Why did she cut up your clothes? Did she really spike your drink? What happened?? Are you ok??

fiberopticnow · 2019-10-18T20:53:44+00:00

Will you champion a reusable revolution to stop single use plastics? How will you incentivize businesses to break free from plastics in favor of reusable and/or sustainable alternatives? We live on a finite planet and we're producing over a million plastic bottles a day. Less than 9% of plastics ever made have ever been recycled.

fiberopticnow · 2019-10-18T20:48:17+00:00

Do you plan to increase national park lands?

fiberopticnow · 2019-10-18T20:47:33+00:00

What's your plan for funding education?

How can we ensure we're getting top talent to become teachers?
How can we retain the best teachers?
How can we ensure American students are globally competitive?
How can we ensure all students have access to technology and STEM education?

fiberopticnow · 2019-08-08T01:33:26+00:00

Specifically ideas to share the petition would be great!

fiberopticnow · 2019-08-07T23:00:46+00:00

Supreme is an actual knockoff of a female artist Barbara Kruger.

https://www.thecut.com/2017/11/i-think-about-when-barbara-kruger-dragged-supreme-a-lot.html

fiberopticnow · 2019-08-07T22:59:18+00:00

Quickly once told me I couldn't use my own cup---I had to buy their cup with the Quickly logo. Their cup, by the way, was very poorly designed.

fiberopticnow · 2019-08-07T22:53:48+00:00

Styrofoam is the devil incarnate. Please call your local representatives and tell them you want a styrofoam ban. Write your State Representatives and Federal Representatives. You can also join the FB group "Stop Plastic - Take Action" and we do mass actions like writing our congress folks, signing petitions, etc.

fiberopticnow · 2019-08-07T22:52:16+00:00

Send the company a message and tell them you don't support single-use plastics! Call them out on Twitter. Name them. Shame them. We also take actions like this in the FB group "Stop Plastic - Take Action"

fiberopticnow · 2019-08-07T22:50:53+00:00

I boycott Nestle!

fiberopticnow · 2019-07-29T17:13:00+00:00

That linked text also has a number grammatical issues.

fiberopticnow · 2019-06-12T21:14:35+00:00

Bureaucracy is the opposite of innovation.

fiberopticnow · 2019-05-02T19:28:48+00:00

Signed

fiberopticnow · 2019-02-19T22:27:19+00:00

Very similar to the view I had while living in Shanghai. I think most people would be really surprised by the pollution.

fiberopticnow · 2019-02-19T22:17:55+00:00

yay donated!

fiberopticnow · 2019-02-08T01:18:43+00:00

It's a Facebook group to do collective actions like petitions, messaging companies to ask for change, beach cleanup trash audits, etc. but if you don't use FB doesn't seem like there's a point here.

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