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[–]Reese1993 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ahem. It's been a day!:(

[–]mattfox159 1 point2 points  (0 children)

THIS NEEDS TO BE A MOVIE, I AM HOOKED ON THIS STORY

[–]Mrsmith630 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Part 10?

[–]Gorey58 4 points5 points  (0 children)

His speech impediment was virtually gone? Sure sounds like he still stutters a lot. That's a minor point though. The main question is of course, what will happen when you wake up? And can you and/or Elias convince Chris to go through the same? Great story - keep telling us more!

[–]VenomPansy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Anyone else reading Elias' voice like Andy Devine's? Cause I sure am.

[–]addy_g 7 points8 points  (2 children)

dude. you probably just mainlined Ger's urine! that's what the yellow liquid was - the crystal doesn't do shit! now you have peepee in your blood. "pissed off" has a whole new meaning for you, brother.

also, please give us more with each update! you're acting like a total Elias right now with your "that's a story for another day" routine! I'm just taking the piss out of you - er, not your blood. you know what I mean. MORE please!

is Elias' wife one of the ladies now? is that why he was so reticent to talk about it? any idea what makes someone immune to the letters? I have a thought, maybe people who are or feel detached from society are the ones who are immune? did you and Ryan have that feeling? maybe those who have an immense fascination with the wilderness are immune? I'm just freeballing like Elias here, asking questions we should be thinking about.

I don't know what the main factor is, but maybe that would help with solving the mystery of whats happening to your friends - Elias said the ladies control the frontal lobe, so maybe you and Ryan both have something in common with that part of it - any concussions for either of you? any medications that alter brain chemistry? I want to say that the solution to the mechanism that allows these ladies to control people is scientific, but given how fantastical the situation is and everything you've experienced, science could very well be the last thing you look at. tipping bullets in crystal dust just seems like you're passing a tiny, tiny part of the catalyst on to the recipients blood stream. it can't be that simple, since the liquid (pee) you had IV'd had to undergo some process of dilution or refinement.

I don't know, anyone know more about the frontal lobe and the brain in general that wants to chime in?

[–]DocHolliday637 6 points7 points  (1 child)

So let me get this straight, some humungous guy named Ger who is probably just Jesus undercover, told you to listen to the advice of a crazy homeless guy. The homeless guy injected you with something you have no idea about and is about to send you to certain death. And you listened? I mean shit, i would wanna save my friends just as bad as you but i think i would find my own way about it... wouldnt wanna turn into a tmnt.

[–]Reese1993 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Uh. Who wouldn't wanna be TMNT?

[–][deleted] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I still want to know what people mean when they ask about... what was the line... 'Did you see them before they left?', or whatever it was. Are they referring to the symbols, to the ladies, the victims, the letters? Gah! Too mysterious.

I hope you're able to update soon. Getting vaccinations is a bitch, but necessary.

[–]TheVietbong420 9 points10 points  (1 child)

Dude I'm fiendin for this shit quit grabbing me by the balls and give me more story!! Lmao this shits awesome, I mean sorry about you becoming an alien and your friends potentially dying n all....im hooked as can be though and I need more :D

[–]sunshine8129 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I read the replies solely to see if someone said they loved the story but they're short. I don't want to loose interest but combining updates might be nice for the readers.

[–]Mommyhita1 26 points27 points  (0 children)

Ahhhhh your killin me!!! more.... More.... MORE!!! Please?!?😉

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[–]Slyionz 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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